Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer grammatical, concise and add one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two short supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, I like seeing fields and small villages pass by, which helps me relax during long journeys.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (use 'take photos' and 'photos are a way to remember'), and explain one specific reason with a linking word. Keep it under five sentences and avoid unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery because photos help me remember special places. For instance, I take snapshots of unusual buildings or sunsets so I can look back at them later and recall how I felt.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use correct comparative language and give concrete reasons. Start with 'I prefer...' then follow with two specific reasons joined by a linking word (because / and). Avoid filler and unknown words; if you forget a word, describe it instead.

Exemplo: I prefer the mountains because I feel safer there and enjoy hiking. Also, the fresh air and quiet trails help me relax, whereas the sea can feel crowded and noisy.

× Yes, I like look out the window when I traveling by bus or car because passage for another side of window.

✓ Yes, I like looking out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the view on the other side of the window is beautiful.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'looking' (Grammar Problem Type 8). The verb 'travel' needs the base form for present simple with 'I' (Grammar Problem Type 6). Use the preposition 'out of' for windows and 'view' is a more natural noun than 'passage'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'view' and use a complete clause 'is beautiful' to finish the sentence. Suggestion: use 'I like looking out of the window when I travel...' and form a complete descriptive clause.

× It's very beautiful, very interesting for me and.

✓ It is very beautiful and very interesting to me.

The fragment lacks correct structure and an object. Use 'to me' to indicate personal opinion (Grammar Problem Type 6). Remove the trailing 'and' and combine adjectives with 'and'. Make a complete sentence: 'It is very beautiful and very interesting to me.'

× Exactly I take the photos because photos for me is means it means a memorize and when I take the photo I re moving it and there is a good memorize for me.

✓ Yes, I take photos because they are a way for me to remember; when I take a photo I am preserving a good memory.

The original sentence misuses 'is means' and 'memorize' as a noun. Use 'are' for plural 'photos' (Grammar Problem Type 27 subject-verb agreement) and express purpose with 'a way to remember' or 'to preserve memories' (Grammar Problem Type 4 for modal/purpose phrasing). Use present continuous 'I am preserving' to describe ongoing action if intended (Grammar Problem Type 10). Also replace 're moving' with 'am preserving' or 'save' to convey meaning. Suggestion: 'I take photos because they help me remember; when I take a photo I preserve a good memory.'

× I re moving it and there is a good memorize for me.

✓ I am saving it and it becomes a good memory for me.

The phrase 'I re moving' is incorrect; use the present continuous 'I am saving' or 'I am keeping' if describing an ongoing action (Grammar Problem Type 10). 'Memorize' is a verb; the correct noun is 'memory' (Grammar Problem Type 13 incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs/word form). Ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct noun forms.

× I prefer the mountains because the sea is very worrying for me.

✓ I prefer the mountains because the sea makes me feel anxious.

'Worrying' is an adjective but the phrase 'the sea is very worrying for me' is awkward. Use a clearer construction 'the sea makes me feel anxious' or 'I feel anxious at the sea' (Grammar Problem Type 6). This better expresses emotional reaction. Suggest using verbs like 'makes me feel' plus an emotion noun or adjective.

× The mountains is very interesting hobbies and the interesting place for me because mountains is very.

✓ The mountains are very interesting; they are a hobby and an interesting place for me, because the mountains are beautiful.

'Mountains' is plural so use 'are' not 'is' (Grammar Problem Type 27). 'Hobbies' is incorrect as mountains cannot be hobbies; better: 'they are a place where I enjoy hobbies' or 'I enjoy mountain activities.' Ensure complete clauses and avoid sentence fragments. Suggest: 'The mountains are very interesting; I enjoy activities there and it is a beautiful place for me.'

× I forgot this word.

✓ I forgot the word I wanted to use.

The sentence is short but unclear in context. To be precise, say 'I forgot the word I wanted to use' or 'I can't recall the word' (Grammar Problem Type 26). This completes the thought and clarifies meaning.