Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid repetition like “I always want to” and extra filler words. Also correct word order and remove duplicated phrases.

Exemplo: Yes — I usually try to sit by the window when I travel by car or bus so I can watch the passing scenery. For example, I enjoy seeing changing landscapes and city streets because they help me relax and notice local life.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and a clearer reason with correct grammar and linking words. Replace hesitation with a short pause or rephrase. Use a linking phrase like “because” and correct verb forms (e.g., “to take photos”).

Exemplo: No, I usually don’t. I prefer watching the scenery because it changes quickly, so it’s difficult to take good photos from a moving vehicle.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a correct comparison structure and fix grammatical errors (use “prefer the sea to the mountains”). Give one specific sensory detail and a brief reason using linking words like “because” or “so”. Avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I love the fresh, salty air. For example, the cool breeze and the sound of waves help me relax and sleep better when I’m on the coast.

× Yes, when I go by car or bus, I always want to sit near the window because I can observe the surrounding scenery. It's I think it's very interesting and fun.

✓ Yes, when I go by car or bus, I always want to sit near the window because I can observe the surrounding scenery. I think it is very interesting and fun.

Error type: Present tense / sentence structure. The original had 'It's I think it's' which repeats and mixes 'it is' with 'I think', causing redundancy and incorrect structure. Correction removes the extra 'It's' and uses 'I think' as a separate clause. Suggestion: say either 'It is very interesting and fun' or 'I think it is very interesting and fun.' Keep one clause to avoid repetition.

× Uh, no. When I sit near the window, I only enjoy watching the changing landscape because I think it is more suitable than take a photo when the scenery changing.

✓ Uh, no. When I sit near the window, I only enjoy watching the changing landscape because I think it is more suitable to watch than to take a photo when the scenery is changing.

Error type: Verb + -ing form and sentence structure. 'More suitable than take a photo' lacks the infinitive 'to' and is missing a parallel structure; 'when the scenery changing' omits the auxiliary verb 'is'. Correction uses parallel infinitives 'to watch' and 'to take' and fixes present continuous 'is changing'. Suggestion: Use parallel forms after comparative constructions and include auxiliary verbs in continuous tenses.

× In my opinion, I prefer the sea than the mountain because I like the sea air.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer the sea to the mountains because I like the sea air.

Error type: Incorrect conjunction/comparative structure. 'Prefer X than Y' is incorrect in English; the correct structure is 'prefer X to Y'. Also 'the mountain' should be plural 'the mountains' or 'a mountain' depending on meaning. Correction uses 'the mountains' to match general preference. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B' and ensure noun number matches general vs specific meaning.

× When I go to the sea, I can feeling the the wind is very cool and very comfortable.

✓ When I go to the sea, I can feel the wind; it is very cool and comfortable.

Error type: Present tense / verb form and article repetition. 'Can feeling' mixes modal 'can' with gerund; after 'can' use base verb 'feel'. Also 'the the' is a duplicated article. The clause 'the wind is very cool and very comfortable' is better split or joined with a semicolon for clarity. Suggestion: After modal verbs use the base form (can feel). Remove duplicate words and simplify adjectives (cool and comfortable are sufficient).