Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 文法の一貫性（時制や主語・動詞の一致）と冗長な表現を減らすことに集中してください。答えはまず簡潔な主題文（Yes/No と理由）で始め、その後で一つか二つの具体的な詳細を加えるとよいです。接続詞（so, because, when など）を適切に使い、不要な重複（"don't usually don't" など）を避けてください。語彙は自然ですが、より正確な語形（e.g. "views are", "when I'm traveling"）を使うと印象が良くなります。発話は最大5文に収め、論理的な流れ（主張→理由→具体例）を守ってください。

Exemplo: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the views are usually stunning and calm me down. For example, I enjoy watching forests and rivers pass by, which helps me relax. Since I often have nothing else to do, I prefer to observe the scenery rather than use my phone.

Sugestão: 理由の提示は良いですが、文法（分詞構文や時制）と語順の改善が必要です。"when the car I'm moving" や "turned out barely" のような誤りを直し、短く明確なセンテンスで理由→具体例→結論の順に述べてください。また、代わりに何をするか（例：記憶に留める、ノートを取る）を簡潔に述べると情報が豊かになります。接続語（because, so, therefore）を適切に使い、二重否定や曖昧表現を避けてください。

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos because it's hard to get a clear shot when the car is moving. I prefer to enjoy and remember the scene with my own eyes, and I rarely look back at photos later anyway. Occasionally I take a quick snapshot if something is particularly beautiful.

Sugestão: 質問に対する直接的な答え（mountains or sea）とその明確な理由を最初に述べ、次に具体的な行動や例（YouTubeで波の音を探す、特定の場所へ行く）を付け加えてください。現在形・主語一致・語彙選択（"listen to the sound of nature", "CL Cliff near the Cliff" や "sincere of the sea" のような表現）を訂正し、繰り返しや曖昧な地名は避けてください。また、5文以内に収めて論理的に展開しましょう。

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I love listening to natural sounds like waves. When I can't visit the coast, I often play recordings of waves on YouTube to relax. If I can go out, I usually visit a nearby cliff or beach to sit and watch the sea for a while.

× Yes definitely, I always look out at the window when I was traveling by vehicle since the view are really stunning which make me feel calm when I'm close to the nature and also I don't usually don't have anything to do when I'm on travelling by a vehicle so it's really worth it.

✓ Yes, definitely. I always look out of the window when I travel by vehicle since the views are really stunning, which makes me feel calm when I'm close to nature, and I usually don't have anything to do when I'm traveling by vehicle, so it's really worth it.

Several tense and agreement problems: 'was traveling' should be simple present 'travel' to match 'always' (present tense). 'look out at the window' -> 'look out of the window' is the correct preposition. 'the view are' -> subject-verb agreement: plural 'views are' and relative clause 'which makes me' (singular verb 'makes' agrees with 'views' as a singular idea or 'this' could be used; here 'which makes' is fine). Double negative 'I don't usually don't' remove one 'don't'. 'on travelling by a vehicle' should be 'when I'm traveling by vehicle' or simply 'when I travel by vehicle'. Suggestions: keep consistent present tense when using habitual adverbs like 'always', fix subject-verb agreement (singular/plural), remove duplicate negatives, and use correct prepositions.'},{