Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Work on grammatical accuracy and clearer sentence structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, use correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., 'look out of the window', 'public transport' or 'public transportation'), and avoid redundancy. Limit to 2–4 concise sentences and add one clear supporting detail with a linking word (for example 'because' or 'so').

Exemplo: I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus. I prefer to sit by the window because I enjoy discovering different neighbourhoods and taking photos of interesting scenes.

Sugestão: Make your reason clearer and correct basic grammar. Begin with a direct answer, then give a specific reason using a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so'). Use singular/plural correctly and more precise vocabulary ('countryside', 'landscapes', 'types of mountains'). Keep it to a couple of sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery when I travel because it helps me relax and remember the trip. I especially like photographing the countryside because there are varied landscapes and unique mountain shapes.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use clear, accurate vocabulary. Say 'I prefer the mountains to the sea' and give specific reasons, avoiding unclear phrases like 'bad species' or 'you can't understand animals'. Use linking words ('because', 'for example') and correct plural forms. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer the mountains to the sea because they offer more opportunities for exploration. For example, I enjoy hiking among different types of trees and observing wildlife, which I find fascinating.

× I really enjoy lookout the window when I'm traveling in a public transportation, especially like a bus.

✓ I really enjoy looking out of the window when I'm traveling by public transport, especially by bus.

The verb 'enjoy' must be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing), so 'lookout' is incorrect; use 'looking'. Also use the preposition 'out of' with 'look' and the correct preposition 'by' with means of transport; 'public transportation' is usually 'public transport' or 'public transportation' without an article. Improvements: use 'enjoy looking out of the window' and 'traveling by public transport'.

× When I'm using public transport I prefer sit on the window and try to discover different prices, scenery, area and taking many photos just for.

✓ When I'm using public transport I prefer to sit by the window and try to discover different places, scenery and areas and take many photos.

After 'prefer' use the infinitive 'to sit' or a gerund consistently; 'sit on the window' is wrong—use 'sit by the window' or 'sit at the window'. 'Prices' seems wrong in context; 'places' is appropriate. Parallel structure: use verbs in the same form ('discover' and 'take'). Remove 'just for' which is incomplete. Improvements: 'prefer to sit by the window' and maintain parallel verbs: 'discover different places, scenery and areas and take many photos.'

× I really like taking photos of scenery when I am traveling because tell me to relax and enjoy the different sightseeing.

✓ I really like taking photos of the scenery when I am traveling because it helps me relax and enjoy the different sights.

The clause lacks a subject and proper verb: 'because tell me to relax' is incorrect. Use 'it helps me relax' to express cause. Also use 'the scenery' or 'sights' and 'sightseeing' is a noun meaning the activity, whereas 'sights' refers to things seen. Improvements: 'because it helps me relax and enjoy the different sights.'

× I prefer countryside because there are so many things to see and to look.

✓ I prefer the countryside because there are so many things to see.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'countryside'. The phrase 'things to see and to look' is incorrect and redundant; use 'things to see' or 'things to look at.' Improvements: 'I prefer the countryside because there are so many things to see.'

× Also so many different kind of mountains.

✓ There are also many different kinds of mountains.

Word order and plurality: 'so many different kind' should be 'many different kinds' and include a subject and verb. Add 'There are' at the start. Improvements: use 'There are also many different kinds of mountains.'

× I prefer the mountain views rather than sea because mountain are mostly sightseeing.

✓ I prefer mountain views rather than the sea because mountains are mostly scenic.

Plural and article errors: 'sea' needs 'the sea' or 'the seaside'; 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' and must agree with verb 'are'. 'Sightseeing' is the activity; use 'scenic' or 'good for sightseeing'. Improvements: 'I prefer mountain views rather than the sea because mountains are mostly scenic.'

× There are so many things to explore on the mountain, like a different kind of trees, bad species and you can't understand animals which is my favorite to see.

✓ There are so many things to explore on the mountains, like different kinds of trees, bird species, and animals, which are my favorites to see.

Article and noun form errors: 'on the mountain' should be 'on the mountains' or 'in the mountains' depending on meaning. 'a different kind of trees' should be 'different kinds of trees'. 'bad species' appears to be a typo for 'bird species'. 'you can't understand animals' is unclear; likely intended 'and animals, which are my favorites to see.' Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'animals, which are my favorites.' Improvements: correct nouns, plural forms, and clarify meaning.