Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and relevant with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. To improve, correct minor collocation and grammar (e.g., “mountainous go by” → “mountains go by” or “mountainous scenery”), avoid listing too many transport modes in one phrase, and add one linking word to make the second sentence flow better. Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car, bus or train because the changing scenery helps me relax. For example, I especially enjoy watching fields and mountains go by, since their colours and shapes are very calming.

Sugestão: Your answer answers the question and gives examples, but hesitations and imprecise phrasing weaken clarity. Remove filler words like “umm,” use correct collocations (e.g., “mountains” and “the sun” or “sunsets”), and structure the examples with a linking phrase. Try to give two concise, specific examples rather than a list with pauses.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos from the car window, especially when I visit new places. For example, I like photographing mountain ranges and dramatic sunsets, and sometimes I snap unusual town architecture to remember the trip.

Sugestão: Your response is clear and gives reasons and activities, but there is a word choice error (“admiring the viewers” should be “admiring the view” or “the scenery”). Use a linking word to connect reasons, and vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., “relaxing” → “soothing”). Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition (e.g., “go to the coast” and “sitting on the beach” are similar).

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I enjoy sitting on the beach and admiring the view, and the sound of the waves is very soothing. In addition, I like swimming and sunbathing, so I often go to the coast to unwind at the weekends.

× I especially enjoy watching fields and mountainous go by, which I find very beautiful.

✓ I especially enjoy watching fields and mountains go by, which I find very beautiful.

The word 'mountainous' is an adjective meaning 'full of mountains' and cannot act as a noun here. The speaker needs the plural noun 'mountains' to match 'fields' and the verb 'go by'. Use nouns when listing scenery items: 'mountains' rather than the adjective 'mountainous'. Suggestion: replace 'mountainous' with the noun 'mountains'.

× For example, I enjoy umm, capturing mountain or sun, sunset or unusual architecture in a town.

✓ For example, I enjoy capturing mountains or the sun, sunsets or unusual architecture in a town.

The original has inconsistent noun forms and punctuation. Use plural nouns for general items: 'mountains' and 'sunsets'. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'sun' if referring to a specific sun in a scene. Remove filler 'umm' in formal responses. Ensure parallel structure in lists: 'capturing mountains, the sun, sunsets, or unusual architecture.' Suggestion: make noun forms consistent and maintain parallel list structure.

× I prefer the sea because I enjoy sitting on the beach and admiring the viewers.

✓ I prefer the sea because I enjoy sitting on the beach and admiring the view.

'Viewers' means people who watch; the intended word is 'view', meaning the scenery. This is a wrong word choice (pronoun/noun misuse). Use 'view' to refer to what you see from the beach. Suggestion: replace 'viewers' with 'view' to convey the scenery.

× I also like swimming and sunbathing, and I often go to the coast to unwind at weekends.

✓ I also like swimming and sunbathing, and I often go to the coast to unwind on weekends.

'At weekends' is British English and grammatically acceptable, but if the speaker is using more general/global English, 'on weekends' is the common prepositional phrase in American English. This item flagged for singular/plural issue is minor; the sentence is otherwise correct. If the instruction restricts to listed types, this is acceptable as a preposition regional choice. No change to singular/plural nouns is needed. Suggestion: choose 'on weekends' for American English or keep 'at weekends' for British English.