Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response grammatically correct, more natural, and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and word choices (e.g., "enjoy doing it", "excited", "curiosity about the area").

Exemplo: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy it because I feel excited to see new places, and I’m curious about the towns and countryside we pass. For example, I like spotting local markets or unusual buildings along the route.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and clearer phrasing. Give a direct topic sentence, then explain purpose briefly with a linking phrase (e.g., "so that"). Avoid filler words and fragmented sentences. Be specific about what you record and why.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually take photos of the scenery outside the window so I can remember the places I’ve visited. For instance, I often photograph landscapes or interesting buildings and then look at the pictures later to share with friends.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and expand with a specific reason and a short example. Use natural phrasing (e.g., "I prefer the sea because it feels spacious"). Add one linking word to connect reason and example.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because it feels spacious and calming. For example, when I sit on the beach and watch the waves, I feel relaxed and less stressed after a busy week.

× Yes I do and I really enjoy do it because I am always so exciting when traveling so I am curious about outside of the state.

✓ Yes, I do, and I really enjoy doing it because I am always so excited when traveling, so I am curious about the areas outside the state.

The verb 'enjoy' must be followed by the gerund form 'doing' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). 'Exciting' describes something that causes excitement; to describe a person's feeling use the adjective 'excited' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). 'About outside of the state' is awkward and ungrammatical: use 'about the areas outside the state' (preposition/article use; Grammar Problem Type ID 11 and 22). Suggestions: after 'enjoy' use verb+ing, use 'excited' for feelings, and rephrase location as 'areas outside the state'.

× Yes, I do, and I usually do that because I went to, uh, record the great scenery and then I can see it. After the time.

✓ Yes, I do, and I usually do that because I want to record the great scenery so I can look at it later.

The original mixes past tense 'went' with present/future intention, causing tense inconsistency (Grammar Problem Type ID 5 and 6). 'Went to record' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is purpose or intention, so use 'want to record' or 'record' (infinitive for purpose; Grammar Problem Type ID 8). 'Then I can see it. After the time.' is awkward; use 'so I can look at it later' to express viewing at a later time (sentence structure issue, Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Suggestions: keep present tense for habitual actions, use infinitive for purpose or 'want to' for intention, and replace fragmented clauses with a single coherent clause 'so I can look at it later'.

× I prefer the sea because I see it's very spacious and I usually feel relaxed when I look at the sea.

✓ I prefer the sea because I find it very spacious, and I usually feel relaxed when I look at it.

'I see it's very spacious' is unnatural; use 'I find it' or 'it seems' to express perception (sentence structure/word choice, Grammar Problem Type ID 26 and 13). Repeating 'the sea' is redundant; replace the second occurrence with the pronoun 'it' (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). Suggestions: use 'find' or 'seem' for opinions, and use pronouns to avoid repetition.