Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 总体表现自然，内容相关且有条理，但可以更简洁并使用更多连接词以增强连贯性；避免口语数字缩写“2nd”，用完整表达；可增加一两个具体细节（例如某次旅行看到的特别场景）来丰富内容。建议控制在3-4句内并使用适当连接词。

Exemplo: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel. First, I want to get a feel for a new city by admiring its streets and architecture; additionally, I enjoy watching local people and daily life. For example, on a recent trip I watched street vendors preparing food, which helped me relax and learn about the local culture.

Sugestão: 回答清晰且相关，但句子较长可适当简化，并加入连接词让信息更紧凑；增加一两个具体例子（例如拍摄时间或拍到的特定景物）会使回答更具体、更有说服力。注意避免重复表达“pictures”与“memories”。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos through the car window to capture beautiful views when I travel. For example, last summer I photographed the winding mountain roads and a dramatic coastal sunset, and I keep these shots as memories of the trip.

Sugestão: 回答直接且有具体理由，结构良好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子之间过渡更自然；可补充一两个具体场景或对比（例如上次海边经历）来增强说服力。注意合并相近信息以保持简洁（例如将放松原因合并）。

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because spending time on the beach relaxes me after a busy week. For example, I enjoy building sandcastles, listening to the waves, and trying local seafood like grilled fish and prawns; besides, I like swimming and other water activities when the weather is good.

× I always look out of the window when I travel.

✓ I always look out of the window when I travel.

该句没有明显的语法错误。动名词/现在分词用法正确，保持原句即可。

× First, I want to get a feel for a new city and admire its streets and architecture, and 2nd, I enjoy watching people and everyday local life.

✓ First, I want to get a feel for a new city and admire its streets and architecture; second, I enjoy watching people and everyday local life.

此句中动名词 watching 用法正确。主要问题是连词和序数表达的格式不符合书面表达习惯，应将“and 2nd,”改为“; second,” 或“and second,” 以使连接更流畅、书面化。建议用“second”完整拼写并用分号或连词明确两部分。

× What's more, looking out of the window helps me relax and clear my mind.

✓ What's more, looking out of the window helps me relax and clear my mind.

句中现在分词短语 looking out of the window 做主语，结构正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I often take photos through the car window to capture the beautiful views I see when traveling.

✓ Yes, I often take photos through the car window to capture the beautiful views I see when travelling.

主要问题是 travel 的美式/英式拼写不一致。若使用英式英语考试环境，建议将 traveling 改为 travelling。动名词作宾语补足语用法正确。建议根据考试要求统一英美拼写。

× The landscapes are usually very picturesque, especially when I drive through mountains or along the coast, and I like keeping those pictures as memories.

✓ The landscapes are usually very picturesque, especially when I drive through the mountains or along the coast, and I like keeping those pictures as memories.

主要错误是名词前缺定冠词。虽然题单中重点是动名词，但此句需加定冠词“the mountains”。动名词 keeping 用法正确。建议在表示特定地形时使用冠词“the”。

× I prefer the sea because I love spending time on the beach.

✓ I prefer the sea because I love spending time on the beach.

句子结构与冠词使用正确，无需修改。

× Building sand castles and listening to the waves helps me relax after a busy week.

✓ Building sandcastles and listening to the waves help me relax after a busy week.

主语为并列的动名词短语“Building sandcastles and listening to the waves”，为复数主语，谓语动词应使用复数形式 help，而不是 helps。建议将 helps 改为 help。另注意 sand castles 可合写为 sandcastles。

× I also enjoy fresh seafood, especially grilled fish and prawns, and there are plenty of water activities like swimming.

✓ I also enjoy fresh seafood, especially grilled fish and prawns, and there are plenty of water activities like swimming.

句子语法正确，冠词和词序使用恰当，无需修改。