Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific detail using a linking word. Avoid filler sounds and correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'the combo of colours' → 'the combination of colours'). Aim for 2–4 sentences total.

Exemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel. For example, I enjoy watching the combination of colours between the sea and the trees because it feels peaceful, especially on sunny days.

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and correct grammar: use a concise topic sentence, then one clear reason and an example. Replace filler words and fix verb forms (e.g., 'I like keep memories' → 'I like to keep memories').

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car window. I do this because I like to keep memories of my trips, for example I always save sunset photos on my phone to look back on later.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference statement, then a brief reason with specific detail. Eliminate fillers and repetitive words. Use linking words like 'however' to show contrast when you mention both mountain and sea.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea, although I also enjoy mountains for their greenery. However, the sea calms me because of its blue colour and wide horizon, especially at sunset when the sky and water look spectacular.

× While traveling, I look out the window.

✓ While travelling, I look out of the window.

The original sentence is mostly correct in tense but has a preposition/usage issue: native speakers usually say 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' is acceptable in some varieties. Suggest using 'out of the window' for clarity and consistency with other sentences. Also note British spelling 'travelling' if matching other instances.

× I appreciate looking at the nature.

✓ I appreciate looking at nature.

The noun 'nature' is uncountable and typically used without the definite or indefinite article in this context. Removing 'the' corrects the preposition/article usage.

× I like how the combo of colours of the sea and the trees.

✓ I like the combination of the colours of the sea and the trees.

The original sentence is missing a main verb and uses an informal fragment 'combo'. Replacing 'combo' with 'combination' and adding 'I like' followed by a complete noun phrase with proper articles fixes sentence structure. Also include 'the' before 'colours' to specify those colours.

× Yes, during the journey, I take photos of uh, of the senior, the, the scenery, umm, because I like keep memories uh, in my phone uh, while with, with the, the trips that I, that I do.

✓ Yes, during the journey I take photos of the scenery because I like to keep memories on my phone while I am on the trips I take.

Multiple issues: 'senior' is a mistaken word for 'scenery'. The verb phrase 'like keep' is incorrect; use 'like to keep'. Prepositions: use 'on my phone' rather than 'in my phone', and simplify 'while with the trips that I do' to 'while I am on the trips I take' or 'during my trips'. This correction addresses verb form, preposition, and word choice errors while keeping present simple tense.

× Honestly, I like uh, uh, the, the mountains, I love uh, the green color, but I prefer uh, seeing the sea because uh, the blue color calms me and uh, it really appears so, so amazing with the, with the color of the sky, umm, especially while, uh, sunset.

✓ Honestly, I like the mountains and I love the green colour, but I prefer to see the sea because the blue colour calms me and it looks amazing with the colour of the sky, especially at sunset.

Tense is present simple which fits, but there are several grammar and word-choice issues: 'prefer seeing the sea' is acceptable but 'prefer to see the sea' is clearer. Use 'colour' consistently; 'appears so, so amazing' is informal and redundant — use 'looks amazing'. Preposition 'while sunset' is incorrect; use 'at sunset'. Removing filler words and duplicate determiners produces a natural sentence in present simple.