Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and clear: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., "watch out with the windows" → "look out of the window"). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the changing scenery. For example, I like seeing trees, fields and houses pass by, which helps me relax and prevents boredom. So I often spend the journey looking outside rather than using my phone.

Sugestão: Give a clear reason and one specific example. Avoid repetitions and unclear phrases (e.g., 'we feel like it's a different customer says'). Use linking words such as 'for example' and 'so' to connect ideas. Keep answers to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of scenery outside the window because I want to remember beautiful moments. For example, I always photograph sunsets or mountain views and later share the best pictures with friends.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear preference, then give specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition (e.g., 'seats are pleasant look'). Use connectors like 'because' and 'for example'. Limit to 2–3 sentences and focus on clarity and correct grammar.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I find the seaside more relaxing. For example, I enjoy sitting on the beach at sunset and listening to the waves, which helps me unwind after a busy week.

× Yeah, I always love to watch out with the the windows and the scenery because it's when you're going in the outside, if you are looking out and you feel very bore and that I'm not born especially in the nature and the trees going from like it's a kind of fun. So I like that one all the time.

✓ I always love looking out of the windows at the scenery because when you are outside and looking out you never feel bored; I especially enjoy nature and the trees passing by, so I like that all the time.

This sentence contains multiple issues but following the provided list we correct article errors and related wording: 'the the windows' has a duplicated definite article; 'the outside' and 'in the outside' are incorrect—use 'outside' without article or 'the outside' only in specific contexts; 'the trees going from' is wrong—use 'trees passing by'. Also verb forms and word choice were simplified: 'love to watch out with' -> 'love looking out of'; 'feel very bore' -> 'feel bored'; 'that I'm not born' is unclear and likely intended as 'I especially enjoy'. Suggestion: avoid duplicate articles, use correct prepositions with 'looking out (of)', convert adjectives appropriately (bored), and simplify sentence structure into shorter clauses for clarity.

× Yes, I always take the photos of the scenery outside. Like I said, when when some mountains or something, sunset, sun, sunrise, we feel like it's a different customer says When I love the nature, I will take the pictures of them.

✓ Yes, I always take photos of the scenery outside. As I said, when I see mountains, sunsets, or sunrises, I feel differently; when I love the nature, I take pictures of it.

Errors involve gerund/participle usage and awkward phrasing. 'Take the photos' is acceptable but 'take photos' is more natural. 'When when some mountains' missing subject—use 'when I see mountains'. 'We feel like it's a different customer says' is nonsensical; corrected to 'I feel differently'. 'When I love the nature, I will take the pictures of them' mixes tense and plural pronoun; use 'I take pictures of it' (nature = singular concept). Suggestion: use '-ing' forms properly for continuous actions (seeing), ensure subject present, keep tense consistent, and use correct pronouns for uncountable nouns (it for nature).

× I prefer seeing on rather than the mountains because seas looks like very pleasant when you when you sit around for 530 sunset here, you see the sunset and the seats are pleasant look and I always go to the sea and I feel it's very pleasant and.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because the sea looks very pleasant. When you sit and watch the sunset, the sea is beautiful, and I always go to the sea because it feels very pleasant.

The original sentence misuses comparative structures and adjectives/adverbs: 'seeing on rather than the mountains' is incorrect—use 'prefer the sea to the mountains'. 'Seas looks' has subject-verb agreement and article issues; use 'the sea looks'. 'Pleasant look' is awkward—use 'is beautiful' or 'looks pleasant'. Time expression 'for 530 sunset' is unclear and removed. Suggestions: use 'prefer X to Y' for preferences, ensure adjective placement before nouns, and use consistent subject-verb agreement.