Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Focus on producing a single clear topic sentence and reduce repetition. Use correct verb forms and avoid filler words. Add one or two concise supporting details with linking words to make the answer coherent (max 5 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes — I usually look out of the window when I travel because I find it relaxing to see the landscape. For example, when I travel from Batumi to Tbilisi I enjoy the greenery and often take photos to share with my family.

Sugestão: Be more precise and avoid unclear phrases. Correct grammar (verb forms, prepositions) and remove confusing words. Use a linking phrase to explain the condition and give one concrete example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos from the car window if the view is interesting. For example, when I see a beautiful coastline or an unusual landscape, I stop and take pictures to post on social media.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference pattern, fix sentence structure and punctuation, and use linking words for contrast. Avoid repeating ideas and keep to 3–4 well-formed sentences with specific reasons.

Exemplo: I like both, but my choice depends on the season. In summer I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and watching the sunset, while in winter I prefer the mountains for skiing and snowy scenery.

× Yes I do, I look outside the window when I am traveling by bus, by car, by train or by plane because for me, it is very relaxing looking outside and seeing beautiful sceneries, greenery and landscape.

✓ Yes, I do. I look out of the window when I am traveling by bus, car, train, or plane because, for me, it is very relaxing to look out and see beautiful scenery, greenery, and landscapes.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'outside the window' (should be 'out of the window' or 'out the window'), plural noun 'sceneries' is nonstandard (use 'scenery'), punctuation and sentence run-on. Suggestions: use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window', use 'scenery' for uncountable visual landscape and 'landscapes' if plural specific scenes, add commas and split clauses for clarity; maintain present continuous for ongoing action 'I am traveling' and infinitive 'to look' after 'relaxing' for correct structure.

× Uh, for instance, when I am traveling from Batumi to Tbilisi, I always looking out and take some pictures and share these pictures with my family members and friends.

✓ For instance, when I am traveling from Batumi to Tbilisi, I always look out, take pictures, and share them with my family and friends.

Errors: verb form 'always looking' is incorrect; should use base verb 'look' with adverb 'always' (present simple) for habitual action. Also omit repetitive 'these pictures' by using 'them' and streamline list with commas. Suggestion: use present simple for habits: 'I always look out, take pictures, and share them.'

× Yes I do. I take pictures when I'm traveling outside the country by my car.

✓ Yes, I do. I take pictures when I'm traveling abroad by car.

Errors: 'outside the country' is wordy; 'abroad' is natural. 'By my car' is unidiomatic; use 'by car' or 'in my car.' Suggestion: use 'abroad' and 'by car' or 'in my car' depending on emphasis.

× It depends on what kind of view is front of me.

✓ It depends on what kind of view is in front of me.

Errors: incorrect word order 'is front of me' should be 'is in front of me.' Suggestion: use correct prepositional phrase 'in front of me' to indicate location.

× For example, if there is beautiful view fascinating seaside online teens, I always take pictures and share these pictures on social media.

✓ For example, if there is a beautiful view, a fascinating seaside, or interesting scenes, I always take pictures and share them on social media.

Errors: missing articles 'a beautiful view', unclear phrase 'fascinating seaside online teens' likely garbled — replace with 'a fascinating seaside' or 'interesting scenes'. Also use plural 'them' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: ensure correct articles before countable nouns and choose clear adjectives; separate items with commas.

× I love both the mountains and skiing and also the sea and swimming.

✓ I love both the mountains and skiing, and also the sea and swimming.

Errors: sentence is acceptable but awkward; needs commas to separate ideas. Suggestion: add a comma after 'skiing' to clarify parallel items; alternatively rephrase: 'I love both the mountains (and skiing) and the sea (and swimming).'

× Which is better for me It depends on what season do we have.

✓ Which is better for me depends on the season we have.

Errors: run-on sentence and incorrect question word order 'what season do we have' used in a statement. Suggestion: use statement word order 'the season we have' or rephrase as a question 'Which is better for me? It depends on the season.'

× If it is summer I would choose a sea because I love swimming and sunset and sunbathe.

✓ If it is summer, I would choose the sea because I love swimming, sunsets, and sunbathing.

Errors: article 'a sea' is incorrect; use 'the sea' or no article. 'Sunset' should be plural or paired as 'sunsets', and 'sunbathe' should be the gerund 'sunbathing' to match the list. Suggestion: use 'the sea', pluralize 'sunsets' if general, and use gerund forms for activities.

× But it is if it is winter I would choose mountain and skiing.

✓ But if it is winter, I would choose the mountains and skiing.

Errors: extra 'it is' creates redundancy, missing article and plural for 'mountain' should be 'the mountains', and punctuation needed. Suggestion: remove the redundant 'it is', use 'the mountains' and add commas for clarity.