Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but has some grammar and coherence issues. Shorten and structure it: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details. Correct grammar (e.g., "do not" → "don't", "travel sick" → "travel-sick" or "motion sick"), and avoid redundancy like repeating reasons. Use a linking word when giving the second idea (e.g., "however," "so").

Exemplo: I usually don't look out the window when I'm travelling because I get motion sick, so I prefer to rest. However, if I really want to see the scenery I ask a friend to take photos for me so I can enjoy them later.

Sugestão: This answer is confusing and contains several grammar and vocabulary errors. Be direct: say 'No' or 'Yes' then explain one clear reason. Avoid unclear phrases like "do not take photo of the wheels," "I have classics," or "rescue the travelling time." Use simple, correct vocabulary (e.g., "I don't take photos from the window because I get motion sick"), and limit to two sentences with a linking word (e.g., "so").

Exemplo: No, I don't take photos from the car window because I often get motion sick. Instead, I ask a friend to take pictures for me so I can look at them later.

Sugestão: Your idea of preferring both is fine, but the answer needs clearer grammar, better linking, and more specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence ("I prefer both the mountains and the sea") then give one specific reason for each and use linking words ("because", "and"). Avoid awkward phrases like "silent atmosphere" (use "peaceful") and "know more about their knowledge" (use "learn about them"). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer both the mountains and the sea because each offers a peaceful place to relax. For example, I enjoy hiking in the mountains to breathe fresh air, and I like visiting the sea to see marine life like fish and jellyfish and learn about them.

× Honestly, I usually don't look out the windows while travelling because I often get travel sick and prefer to rest.

✓ Honestly, I usually don't look out the window while travelling because I often get travel sick and prefer to rest.

The noun 'windows' should be singular 'window' to match the idiomatic expression 'look out the window' when speaking generally about looking through the side window while travelling. Use singular for the general action; both forms can be used, but in this context singular is more natural and concise.

× If I really want to see the views I will ask my friends to take photos for me so I can enjoy them later.

✓ If I really want to see the views, I will ask my friends to take photos for me so I can enjoy them later.

A comma is needed after the conditional clause for correct sentence structure. The verb tense 'will ask' is appropriate for the future conditional; this suggestion is about punctuation rather than tense, but it keeps the original tense.

× No, I do not take photo of the wheels outside the car windows.

✓ No, I do not take photos of the views outside the car window.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' because taking multiple pictures is implied. 'Wheels' is incorrect for 'views'—likely a word choice error. 'Car windows' can be singular 'car window' if speaking generally; plural 'car windows' would also be possible, but 'outside the car window' is more idiomatic.

× It's because I have mentioned that I have classics and also I prefer to rescue the travelling time and also I will ask my friend to take photos to the views because I want to enjoy it later.

✓ It's because I mentioned that I have classic cars, and I prefer to save travel time, so I will ask my friend to take photos of the views because I want to enjoy them later.

Multiple issues: 'have mentioned' is corrected to past simple 'mentioned' to match the likely completed action. 'have classics' is unclear; corrected to 'have classic cars' assuming intended meaning. 'Rescue the travelling time' is incorrect collocation; corrected to 'save travel time'. 'Take photos to the views' should be 'take photos of the views'. Pronoun 'it' should be plural 'them' to refer to 'photos' or 'views'. These corrections adjust verb tense, noun plurality, prepositions, and pronoun agreement.

× I prefer both mountain and sea is because those views can provide the silent atmosphere for me to relax and to refresh my mind.

✓ I prefer both the mountains and the sea because those views can provide a peaceful atmosphere for me to relax and refresh my mind.

'Mountain and sea' should be plural 'mountains and the sea' with definite articles for natural reference. Remove unnecessary 'is'. 'Silent atmosphere' is unnatural; 'peaceful atmosphere' is more idiomatic. 'To relax and to refresh' can be simplified to 'relax and refresh' for parallel structure.

× Also, I would like to touch different animals such as fish, jellyfish and monkey which I very enjoy to know more about their knowledge.

✓ Also, I would like to touch different animals such as fish, jellyfish, and monkeys because I really enjoy learning more about them.

'Monkey' should be plural 'monkeys' to match the list. 'Which I very enjoy to know more about their knowledge' is ungrammatical: corrected to 'because I really enjoy learning more about them.' This fixes quantifier/adverb placement ('very enjoy' -> 'really enjoy'), verb phrase ('learn more about' instead of 'know more about their knowledge'), and pronoun reference ('them').