Part 1
Examinador
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Candidato
No I think I will get car sick so I usually listen to music and close my eyes or listening on podcast.
Examinador
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Candidato
Now I think it's a little danger, you know, and I usually use my eyes to watching the beautiful landscape. I don't like take photos when the car.
Examinador
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Candidato
Both. I like mountain and I also love the sea. I think mountain, especially the ice mountain, can bring me some special feel. And the sea, the blue sea, the blue ocean is my favorite landscape.
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题,先用一句主题句表明习惯,然后用1–2句具体说明原因和补充细节。注意语法(动词形式、一致性)和简洁性,避免冗长。可以用连接词(so, because, therefore)让表达更连贯。
Exemplo: I usually avoid looking out of the window when I travel by car because I often get car sick. So I prefer to listen to music or podcasts and close my eyes to stay comfortable.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 需要更直接且语法正确地回答问题:先给出肯定或否定,再给出具体原因和替代做法。注意动词形式、冠词和固定搭配(dangerous, watch)。用连接词(because, so)使句子逻辑清晰。
Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos from a moving car because it feels dangerous and the pictures often turn out blurry. Instead, I prefer to simply watch and enjoy the scenery with my eyes.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答要组织成一到两句:先表明总体偏好,再解释原因并给具体细节或比较。避免重复词汇(blue sea/the blue ocean),注意单复数和形容词使用(mountains, special feeling)。使用连接词(however, and, because)以增强连贯性。
Exemplo: I like both, but if I had to choose I'd pick the sea because I find the vast blue water calming. However, I also enjoy mountains—especially icy peaks—because they give me a sense of awe and freshness.
× No I think I will get car sick so I usually listen to music and close my eyes or listening on podcast.
✓ No. I think I will get carsick, so I usually listen to music and close my eyes or listen to podcasts.
句中出現動詞形式不一致:在列舉動作時使用了現在式的動詞 listen 與現在分詞 listening 混用,應保持一致,使用原形/一般現在時。此外 podcast 應使用複數或加冠詞以符合語境;carsick 通常寫作一詞。建議在列舉動作時使用相同的動詞形式(例如 listen / listen to podcasts)。
× Now I think it's a little danger, you know, and I usually use my eyes to watching the beautiful landscape.
✓ Now I think it's a little dangerous, you know, and I usually use my eyes to watch the beautiful landscape.
兩處錯誤:1) danger 是名詞,應用形容詞 dangerous 來描述狀態;2) 動詞短語 "use my eyes to watching" 中 to 作為不定式標誌,後面應接動詞原形 watch 而不是 -ing 形式。建議把 danger 改為 dangerous,並將 watching 改為 watch。
× I don't like take photos when the car.
✓ I don't like to take photos in the car.
原句缺少不定式標記 to(動詞搭配錯誤),且介係詞用法不當:表示在車內應用 in the car。還有冠詞 the 用於特指某輛車是正確的,整句改為 I don't like to take photos in the car。
× Both. I like mountain and I also love the sea.
✓ Both. I like mountains and I also love the sea.
名詞單複數使用錯誤:當泛指喜歡山時,mountain 應使用複數 mountains 或者加上定冠詞/the mountain。此處用複數更自然。建議將 mountain 改為 mountains。
× I think mountain, especially the ice mountain, can bring me some special feel.
✓ I think mountains, especially the ice mountains, can give me a special feeling.
多處單複數與詞類使用不當:1) 類似前句,mountain 應為複數 mountains 或使用定冠詞;2) ice mountain 若指多座冰雪山脈應為 ice mountains;3) "bring me some special feel" 用詞不自然,應用動詞 give 與名詞 feeling 表達感受。建議改為 "mountains... can give me a special feeling"。
× And the sea, the blue sea, the blue ocean is my favorite landscape.
✓ And the sea, the blue sea, the blue ocean, is my favorite scenery.
詞彙與句子結構問題:landscape 通常指地形或風景畫,不太用於表示抽象的喜好;scenery 或 scenery/ seascape 更合適。句中列舉多次短語作主語時需注意在末尾加逗號並保留單數動詞 is(若視為整體)。建議用 "the sea... is my favorite scenery" 或簡化為 "The sea is my favorite scenery."。