Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Отлично, что вы даёте прямой ответ и выражаете эмоции, но ваша речь нуждается в упрощении и исправлении грамматики. Старайтесь давать чёткое тематическое предложение, затем 1–2 поддерживающие детали, используя связки (for example, because, so). Избегайте лишних фраз и следите за временем глаголов и артиклями (a/an/the). Например, замените «That's makes me feel happier than that» на «That makes me happy» и «soon I will see new country» на «I will soon see a new country».

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car. I enjoy watching the changing landscapes because it makes the journey feel more interesting, and I often imagine what the new place will be like. For example, when we drive to another country, I like spotting different signs and architecture.

Sugestão: Хороший ответ с конкретным примером (солнце) и личной оценкой. Улучшите связность, уберите заполнители (umm) и используйте точные фразы: «I enjoy taking photos of sunrises and sunsets because they are beautiful»; добавьте одну короткую деталь о том, как или зачем вы снимаете (e.g. for memories, to share). Это сделает ответ более естественным и логичным.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery, especially sunrises and sunsets, because I love their colours. I usually take them to keep memories or to share on social media, and I try to capture interesting compositions like a silhouette against the sky.

Sugestão: Вы отвечаете прямо, но предложение расплывчато и содержит ошибки (повторы, нелогичные фразы «we see good for use»). Дайте чёткое выборочное утверждение (even if you like both, state a slight preference) и подкрепите 1–2 конкретными причинами с использованиeм связок (because, whereas). Избегайте повторов и проверяйте словосочетания (ski, swim, relax).

Exemplo: I like both, but if I had to choose, I'd pick the mountains because I enjoy skiing and the fresh air. However, I also love the sea for swimming and relaxing on the beach, so both have different appeals for me.

× That's makes me feel happier than that.

✓ That makes me feel happier.

The phrase used both 'That' and 's' causing a subject-verb redundancy and incorrect structure. Remove the contraction that's and use 'That makes me feel happier.' to have a clear subject and verb agreement. Also 'than that' is unnecessary and unclear, so omit it.

× I'm traveling and I am in and soon I will see new country.

✓ I'm traveling and I am in a new country, and soon I will see new places.

The original sentence is fragmented and missing articles and objects. Add the article 'a' before 'new country' and clarify the second part 'see new places' or 'see the new country'. Ensure consistent tense: present continuous for traveling and future 'will see' is acceptable. Also remove the stray 'in' or complete it as 'in a new country.'

× I really enjoy to take photos of sunsets or sunrises because I like how they look and umm, the nature also is very beautiful in this time and I really enjoy to do it.

✓ I really enjoy taking photos of sunsets or sunrises because I like how they look, and nature is also very beautiful at that time, so I really enjoy doing it.

After 'enjoy' use the -ing form (gerund), not the infinitive 'to take.' Use 'at that time' for temporal expression rather than 'in this time.' Replace 'the nature also is' with 'nature is also' for natural English word order. Use 'doing it' (gerund) instead of 'to do it.'

× For me, it's a hard question because I like both.

✓ For me, it's a hard question because I like both of them.

The phrase 'both' usually needs a following reference like 'both of them' to be clear when referring to two things (mountains and sea). Adding 'of them' completes the sentence and improves clarity.

× I enjoy the time when we are going to the mountains where where we can ski, we see good for use.

✓ I enjoy the times when we go to the mountains, where we can ski and have a good time.

Use 'go to the mountains' rather than 'are going to the mountains' for a habitual preference, though present simple or continuous can work; 'times' plural fits repeated experiences. Remove the duplicated 'where where.' 'We see good for use' is incorrect; replace with 'have a good time.'

× But also I really like when we go on the sea where I can swim and just have fun.

✓ But I also really like going to the sea, where I can swim and have fun.

Use 'going to the sea' rather than 'go on the sea.' 'Go on the sea' implies being on a boat. 'Going to' or 'at the sea' are correct. Use 'have fun' without 'just' unless emphasis is needed. Use consistent gerund form for preferences: 'I like going.'