Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating the difference between driving and being a passenger, then add a brief reason using linking words (because/so) and keep it to 2–3 sentences. Correct tense and prepositions (e.g., "when I drive" not "when I was driving").

Exemplo: When I drive, I don’t look out much because I need to concentrate on the road. However, when I’m a passenger on a bus I enjoy looking at the scenery because it helps me relax and passes the time.

Sugestão: Give a clear, concise reason with correct grammar and linking words. Start with a direct answer (No), then explain briefly why photos are usually poor from a moving vehicle, and offer an alternative if relevant. Avoid fragmented sentences.

Exemplo: No, I usually don’t. Because the car is moving and the window glass often causes reflections, my photos turn out blurry or unclear, so I prefer taking pictures when we stop or when I’m at a viewpoint.

Sugestão: Respond with one clear preference or say you like both depending on conditions. Use linking words (if/but/when), correct nouns (weather, mountains, beach) and avoid filler words. Provide a short reason and a specific example to support your choice.

Exemplo: It depends on the weather. If the weather is cool and clear, I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and fresh air, but on very hot days I like the beach since swimming and shade are more comfortable.

× Yes, when I was driving I don't like looking in outside because I must focus on driving.

✓ Yes, when I am driving I don't like looking outside because I must focus on driving.

Tense inconsistency and incorrect preposition: 'was driving' (past) conflicts with habitual present 'I don't like'; use present simple 'I am driving' or 'I drive' for current habits. Also 'looking in outside' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'looking outside'. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for habitual actions and the correct preposition 'outside'.

× But when I was in bus I like looking outside.

✓ But when I am on the bus I like looking outside.

Tense and article/preposition errors: 'was in bus' mixes past with present preference; change to present 'am' or 'I like' for habitual action. Also use the article 'the' and preposition 'on' with 'bus' ('on the bus'). Suggestion: say 'when I am on the bus I like looking outside.'

× No, because in car window.

✓ No, because through the car window it's difficult.

Fragment and missing verb: 'because in car window' is incomplete and lacks a verb and article. Rephrase to a full clause that explains the reason, e.g., 'because through the car window it's difficult' or 'because the car window makes photos difficult.' Suggestion: always include subject and verb when giving reasons.

× Stop at me too.

✓ Also, the car is moving too fast for me to take photos.

Unclear fragment: 'Stop at me too' is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning appears to be that movement affects photos. Rephrase to a complete sentence explaining that movement prevents good photos. Suggestion: use a clear subject and verb to express the idea.

× I think this is windows glass and other moving so a picture become bad.

✓ I think it's because the window glass and the movement make the picture bad.

Word order and verb form issues: 'this is windows glass and other moving' is ungrammatical; use 'the window glass and the movement' as subjects. Use plural agreement 'make' (plural subject) and correct verb form 'make the picture bad' instead of 'become bad.' Suggestion: identify subjects properly and match verb number and form.

× So I prefer to.

✓ So I prefer not to take pictures.

Incomplete sentence: 'I prefer to' requires an infinitive object ('to take pictures'). Add the missing verb phrase to complete the thought. Suggestion: always include the verb after 'prefer to.'

× I it's depends on uh, weather.

✓ It depends on the weather.

Extra words and tense/structure: 'I it's depends' is incorrect; correct subject-verb pair is 'It depends'. Remove extraneous 'I' and filler words. Use 'the weather' with definite article. Suggestion: say 'It depends on the weather.'

× If weather is nice and the mock their mock, I like to umm, visit in mountains and uh, if very hot days I prepare to stay in beach.

✓ If the weather is nice and calm, I like to visit the mountains, and if it is very hot, I prefer to stay at the beach.

Multiple errors: missing articles ('the weather', 'the mountains', 'the beach'), incorrect phrase 'mock their mock' (likely 'calm'), incorrect prepositions ('visit the mountains' not 'visit in mountains'; 'stay at the beach' not 'stay in beach'), verb choice and tense ('I prefer' or 'I like' rather than 'I prepare to'). Suggestion: use correct articles, common collocations ('visit the mountains', 'stay at the beach'), and clear verbs ('prefer' instead of 'prepare').