Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak with correct grammar and more concise structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms (e.g., “when I travel”) and avoid redundancy (e.g., “feel relaxing” → “feel relaxed”).

Exemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel, especially in another country or through the countryside. For example, I enjoy watching trees, mountains and fields of flowers because the view helps me feel relaxed and lets me appreciate the present moment.

Sugestão: Be more specific and avoid vague phrases. Start with a direct answer, then give a clear reason and a brief example. Use linking words (e.g., “because”, “for example”) and correct plural/singular forms.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to remember the view. For example, I will photograph wildflowers, mountains and waves to capture the colours and atmosphere, which helps me relax.

Sugestão: Organise your response: give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then provide 2 specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear expressions (e.g., “feel a little accident”) and correct grammar. Explain how hiking benefits you (mental and physical) with concrete details.

Exemplo: I prefer the mountains. Firstly, I enjoy hiking there because it helps me stay fit and reduces stress. Secondly, living in a small landlocked country means I rarely see the sea, so mountain scenery feels familiar and comforting.

× I usually look at the window when I traveling the other country or the countryside because it makes me feel relaxing and like enjoying at the present moment.

✓ I usually look out of the window when I travel in another country or in the countryside because it makes me feel relaxed and enjoy the present moment.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'traveling' after 'when I' (use simple present for habitual actions), incorrect preposition 'at the window' (use 'out of the window' or 'out the window'), incorrect phrase 'the other country' (use 'another country'), adjective/adverb misuse 'feel relaxing' (should be 'feel relaxed'), awkward phrase 'like enjoying at the present moment' (use 'enjoy the present moment'). Suggestion: Use simple present for habits, choose correct prepositions, use adjectives for feelings (relaxed) and simple verbs for activities (enjoy).

× So I really like to look at the window like the trees and beautiful mountains or even flowers.

✓ So I really like to look out of the window at trees, beautiful mountains, or even flowers.

Errors: 'to look at the window' should be 'look out of the window' and wrong usage 'like the trees' where 'at trees' is needed. The sentence unnecessarily uses 'to' before 'look' after 'like' — 'like to look' is acceptable but better as 'like to look out of the window at...' Suggestion: Use correct prepositions 'out of' and 'at' to indicate viewing objects outside, and list items with commas.

× Oh of course, I take photos to remember the waves, like the wildflowers or the mountains and the trees because it looks really beautiful and it makes me feel more relaxed.

✓ Oh, of course I take photos to remember the waves, wildflowers, mountains, and trees because they look really beautiful and make me feel more relaxed.

Errors: subject-pronoun agreement and tense: 'it looks' and 'it makes' refer to plural subjects (waves, wildflowers, mountains, trees) so use 'they look' and 'they make'. Also punctuation: comma after 'Oh'. Suggestion: Match verb number to compound subjects and keep present simple for habitual actions.

× I prefer mountains because in my country there is no sea because it's quite a small country.

✓ I prefer mountains because there is no sea in my country; it is quite a small country.

Errors: repeated 'because' creates redundancy and awkward sentence structure. Also word order 'in my country there is no sea' is acceptable but clearer as 'there is no sea in my country'. Suggestion: Use one 'because' and join clauses clearly, or use a semicolon/period to separate related ideas.

× So I always prefer the mountains because I really love to go hiking because it makes me feel a little accident.

✓ So I always prefer the mountains because I really love hiking; it makes me feel energized.

Errors: 'love to go hiking' is acceptable but 'love hiking' is more natural. Major error: 'makes me feel a little accident' is incorrect — 'accident' is wrong word; likely intended 'excited' or 'active' or 'energized'. Suggestion: Choose the correct adjective to express the feeling (e.g., energized, excited) and avoid repeating 'because' twice.

× It's about good for mental and physical health.

✓ It is good for mental and physical health.

Errors: 'It's about good for' is ungrammatical. Use 'It is good for' to state a general truth. Suggestion: Use simple present 'is' and correct adjective phrase 'good for' to describe benefits.