Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitation and grammar errors (use correct verb forms and articles). For example, say you prefer to sleep because long journeys make you tired and you get motion sickness. Aim for 2–4 sentences, avoid filler words like "umm" and incorrect phrases like "so tired" or "in these ways."

Exemplo: No, I usually sleep when I travel by bus or car because long journeys make me very tired. Also, I often get motion sickness, so sleeping helps me feel better. Therefore I rarely look out of the window.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief reason and one supporting detail. Correct grammar ("I don't have time to take photos") and avoid unclear phrases. Use a linking word like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I rarely take photos from a car window because I usually sleep during long trips. Also, when I am awake the view passes too quickly, so I don't have time to take good pictures.

Sugestão: Start with a direct statement of preference, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, "because" and "also"). Improve sentence structure and reduce hesitations. Replace vague phrases like "it's really so good for me" with concrete details (e.g., relaxing beaches, family activities). Keep responses to 2–4 clear sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea. Because I have never visited mountains, I enjoy seaside holidays more: the beaches are relaxing and my family and I often visit coastal countries where we swim and relax together.

× Actually no, because I prefer to sleep in the long umm journeys by traveling bus or car because it is very so tired.

✓ Actually no, because I prefer to sleep on long journeys by bus or car because I get very tired.

The original sentence has incorrect verb tense/use and awkward phrasing: 'in the long journeys' should be 'on long journeys' (preposition and article), 'by traveling bus or car' is ungrammatical; use 'by bus or car'. 'it is very so tired' incorrectly uses 'tired' with 'it' and wrong word order; the speaker should say 'I get very tired.' Suggestion: use 'on long journeys' and 'I get very tired' to express becoming tired during travel. Grammar problem type ID:6

× And I feel very bad when we travel around the umm cities by bus or car because I feel sick myself and so I prefer to sleep in these ways.

✓ And I feel very bad when we travel around cities by bus or car because I feel sick, so I prefer to sleep on these journeys.

Problems: 'the umm cities' should be 'cities' (unnecessary article), 'myself' is unnecessary and awkward here; 'in these ways' is vague—use 'on these journeys.' Also combine clauses and remove repetition of 'I feel'. Suggestion: simplify to 'I feel sick, so I prefer to sleep on these journeys.' Grammar problem type ID:12

× When, How? Because honestly I prefer just sleep under the in the long way and I don't have any time for take photos of the scenery outside the car window and it's be just very umm, rare so.

✓ When? How? Honestly, I prefer to sleep on long journeys and I don't have time to take photos of the scenery outside the car window; it's just very rare.

Multiple issues: 'prefer just sleep' needs 'prefer to sleep' (verb structure), 'under the in the long way' is incorrect preposition and article—use 'on long journeys', 'have any time for take photos' should be 'have time to take photos' (verb infinitive), 'it's be just very umm, rare so' is ungrammatical—use 'it's just very rare.' Suggestion: use correct verb patterns ('prefer to' + base verb), correct prepositions ('on long journeys'), and 'have time to' + verb. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Honestly, I've never been on the mountains and I have no desire for this.

✓ Honestly, I've never been to the mountains and I have no desire to go.

Use 'been to the mountains' (preposition 'to' with 'been') rather than 'on the mountains.' 'I have no desire for this' is awkward; use 'I have no desire to go.' The present perfect 'I've never been' is correct, but the preposition and follow-up phrase needed fixing. Suggestion: say 'been to the mountains' and 'desire to go.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× Umm, we, uh, with my, I'm with my family, umm, usually around the world and uh, also we usually umm, go to the countries with the sea and it's really so good for me and I prefer the sea.

✓ Umm, I'm with my family; we usually travel around the world and we often go to countries by the sea. It's really great for me and I prefer the sea.

Problems: redundant and broken pronoun and subject phrases ('we, uh, with my, I'm with my family')—clarify subject as 'I'm with my family; we...'. 'Usually around the world' needs verb 'travel' and clearer structure. 'Go to the countries with the sea' should be 'go to countries by the sea' or 'coastal countries.' 'It's really so good for me' is informal/awkward; use 'It's really great for me.' Suggestion: streamline subject and verbs, use 'travel' and 'countries by the sea.' Grammar problem type ID:12}]}