Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is personal and relevant, but it is somewhat disfluent and repetitive. To improve, make one clear topic sentence, reduce repetition, correct grammar (e.g. "the scenery" not "sceneries"), and use one or two supporting details linked with a connective (e.g. "because" or "so"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the passing scenery relaxing. For example, watching trees and streets helps me take a break from my phone and gives me time to think quietly. This simple habit makes journeys feel calmer and less stressful.

Sugestão: Your idea is clear but the answer contains hesitations and some awkward wording (e.g. "worse for snapshots", "natural resources" misused). Improve fluency by removing fillers, choosing precise vocabulary (e.g. "suitable for photos", "natural scenery"), and using a linking phrase to explain when and why you take photos.

Exemplo: It depends on the view; I only take photos when the scene is especially striking. For instance, I would photograph dramatic urban skylines or breathtaking natural scenery because those views are memorable and worth keeping.

Sugestão: Your response addresses the question but is repetitive and ends abruptly with unclear phrasing ("the same for the seats"). To improve, give a clear topic sentence stating the preference condition, then add 1–2 specific reasons with linking words (e.g. "because" or "so"). Avoid filler phrases like "you know" and correct vocabulary ("sea", not "seats").

Exemplo: It depends on my mood and company: I prefer the mountains when I'm with friends because we can camp and hike together. However, I enjoy the sea when I want to relax alone and listen to the waves, which feels peaceful.

× I think I do, I quite enjoy it, looking out the windows at the sceneries or the views I'm passing by and I think it is kind of the way to relax myself 'cause I want to take a break from phone so it's looking out, will get myself time to to think about my life whilst enjoy the viewed out there.

✓ I think I do. I quite enjoy looking out of the windows at the scenery or the views I pass by, and I think it is a way to relax because I want to take a break from my phone, so looking out gives me time to think about my life while enjoying the views outside.

Original sentence has incorrect and mixed verb -ing uses and awkward structure. Use 'enjoy looking' (verb + -ing after enjoy). Use 'looking out of the windows' (preposition) and 'the scenery' (uncountable) not 'sceneries'. Use 'I pass by' (present simple) for habitual action. Replace informal '’cause' with 'because' and use 'gives me time' instead of 'will get myself time'. Use 'while enjoying the views outside' for correct -ing clause parallelism and clarity. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I quite enjoy it, looking out the windows at the sceneries or the views I'm passing by

✓ I quite enjoy looking out of the windows at the scenery or the views I pass by

Use 'look out of' (or 'look out the window' without 'at') to indicate looking through a window. 'Scenery' is uncountable so not 'sceneries'. Use present simple 'I pass by' for habitual actions. Preposition 'at' after 'passing by' is unnecessary here. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I think it is kind of the way to relax myself

✓ I think it is a way to relax

Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'way'. Omit reflexive 'myself' because 'relax' does not require it here. 'Kind of' is informal; remove for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:22

× 'cause I want to take a break from phone

✓ because I want to take a break from my phone

Use the possessive pronoun 'my' before 'phone'. In English, we do not say 'break from phone' without a determiner. Grammar problem type ID:12

× so it's looking out, will get myself time to to think about my life whilst enjoy the viewed out there

✓ so looking out gives me time to think about my life while enjoying the views outside

Maintain present tense and correct verb forms: use 'gives' (present simple) for habitual result. Use 'to think' not split. Use 'while enjoying' (present participle) for simultaneous action. 'Viewed' is incorrect; use 'views'. Remove redundant 'myself'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I think it is really depending on the, the, the view out there, whether it is worse for snapshots.

✓ I think it really depends on the view outside and whether it is worth taking snapshots.

Use 'depends on' not 'is depending on' for stative verbs (also present simple). 'Worse' is incorrect; intended word is 'worth'. Remove repeated fillers 'the, the, the'. Use 'view outside' instead of 'view out there'. Grammar problem type ID:14

× I think if it's a beautiful or very unique pictures such as, uh, skyscrapers or very beautiful urban views or natural resources, I would definitely take a photo.

✓ If it's a beautiful or very unique scene, such as skyscrapers, striking urban views, or natural landscapes, I would definitely take a photo.

Mixed singular/plural: 'a beautiful or very unique pictures' is inconsistent. Use 'scene' (singular) or make plural consistently. 'Natural resources' is wrong in this context; use 'natural landscapes' or 'scenery'. Keep conditional tense 'would' is acceptable for hypothetical situations. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I like to go mountains only when I have lots of friends with me and we go camping because you know sitting in the mountain areas by yourself it could be kind of a lonely and the the same for the seats.

✓ I like to go to the mountains only when I have lots of friends with me and we go camping, because sitting in the mountain areas by yourself can be quite lonely, and the same goes for the sea.

Add preposition 'to' after 'go' when referring to places: 'go to the mountains'. Use plural 'mountains' with 'the'. 'Could be kind of a lonely' is ungrammatical; use 'can be quite lonely'. 'The the same for the seats' seems intended as 'the same goes for the sea' — correct the noun and structure. Use 'sea' not 'seats'. Grammar problem type ID:1