Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Focus on correct grammar (tense and subject-verb agreement) and clearer vocabulary (e.g., "I enjoy looking at the scenery," "beautiful weather").

Exemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by car or bus. For example, on long trips I enjoy watching the countryside because the views are beautiful and relaxing. Moreover, good weather makes the trip more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly (yes/no) and explain briefly why. Use coherent linking words (however, usually, sometimes) and give one clear reason. Correct vocabulary: "scenery" not "scenario", "road" not "Rd.", and avoid unfinished sentences.

Exemplo: Sometimes I take photos from the car window, but not often. Usually I am too tired or I prefer to read during busy road trips; however, when the view is especially attractive I will take a quick photo.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference in the first sentence, then support it with specific reasons and one example. Use linking words (because, for example, so) and correct collocations ("mountain treks", "go trekking", "my friends and I"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the greenery and fresh air. For example, my friends and I often go trekking in the hills to relax and take a break from city life. I find the peaceful atmosphere there more refreshing than the busy seaside.

× Yes, of course, yes, of course, sometime when I went forever for a trip.

✓ Yes, of course. Sometimes when I went on a trip...

The original has repetition and incorrect word choice 'sometime' and 'went forever'. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26). Use 'Sometimes' for habitual occasions and 'went on a trip' for correct verb+preposition. Break into clearer clauses or finish the thought.

× So I'm really enjoy it because when I'm because it is very good weather sometimes.

✓ So I really enjoy it because the weather is often very good.

This is a present tense issue (ID 6). 'I'm really enjoy' mixes present continuous with base verb; correct form is 'I really enjoy'. Also 'because it is very good weather sometimes' is awkward; use 'the weather is often very good.'

× So I really enjoy it and I will see all the things around and it's very fantastic weather and I also absolutely absurd.

✓ I really enjoy it because I can see everything around me when the weather is fantastic, and I feel absolutely amazed.

This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The original contains run-on fragments and the inappropriate word 'absurd'. Replace with 'amazed' and combine clauses with clear connectors.

× Yes, sometime when I use car so I don't like to observe the scenario because I'm so tired and sometimes I read the books and now it's and after that I take some risk because it is too much busy Rd. trips.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I use the car I don't like to look at the scenery because I'm tired; sometimes I read books, and when the road is very busy I avoid taking pictures during the trip.

This contains multiple errors but primarily singular/plural issues (ID 1) and other structure problems. 'sometime' -> 'sometimes'; 'use car' -> 'use the car'; 'observe the scenario' -> 'look at the scenery'; 'the books' -> 'books'; 'too much busy Rd.' -> 'the road is very busy.' Adjust plurality and articles and simplify sentence structure.

× So I don't like to enjoy this scenario around the car and I'm very.

✓ So I don't enjoy the scenery outside the car, and I often feel too tired to look at it.

This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). 'Don't like to enjoy this scenario' is unnatural; use 'don't enjoy the scenery.' The fragment 'and I'm very.' is incomplete; complete the thought with 'often feel too tired.'

× Yes, yes, of course the mountains I really appreciate that because I like the greenery and I also want to travel on mountains treks because I like it and I really enjoyed sometime I I and my friends also are going togethers and take some rest and mountain.

✓ Yes, of course I prefer the mountains. I appreciate them because I like the greenery and I want to go on mountain treks. I really enjoy them; sometimes my friends and I go together to rest in the mountains.

This sentence has incorrect conjunction use and many structural problems (ID 16). Fix run-on clauses, use 'prefer the mountains', 'go on mountain treks', and correct pluralization and word order: 'my friends and I go together.' Also correct tense consistency: 'really enjoy' and 'sometimes... go.'