Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, correct grammar, and stay on-topic. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question directly, then add one supporting detail. Avoid repetition and unclear words (e.g., 'grenade'). Use linking words if you add a second point.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I prefer the window seat because I enjoy watching passing landscapes, especially green fields and small villages, which help me relax during the journey.

Sugestão: Answer directly then give a specific reason or brief example. Use correct tense and reduce repetition: avoid phrases like 'I used to' unless you mean past habit. Add one linking word to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of scenery from the car window because I enjoy capturing landscapes. For instance, when I travel through the countryside I photograph the green fields and old houses to remember the trip.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference sentence, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., 'mountains over the sea', 'peaceful', 'breathtaking'). Avoid filler words like 'like' and 'wow'.

Exemplo: I prefer the mountains to the sea because they feel peaceful and refreshing. For example, I enjoy hiking through snowy trails and admiring the breathtaking views, which helps me relax and disconnect from city noise.

× I'm a person who loves traveling a lot and I travel you very few places.

✓ I'm a person who loves traveling a lot, and I travel to very few places.

The sentence uses incorrect verb form and missing preposition 'to' after 'travel'. This is a present simple context describing habitual action, so use 'travel' correctly with preposition: 'travel to' indicates visiting places. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'travel to' when indicating destinations and keep present simple for routines.

× But when I used to travel I always used to sit in the window seat and look at the scenery and the grenade there is unmatched.

✓ But when I traveled I always sat in the window seat and looked at the scenery, and the greenery there was unmatched.

'Used to' expresses past habits, but repeating 'used to' with 'always' is redundant; use simple past 'traveled', 'sat', 'looked' or keep 'used to' consistently. The word 'grenade' is incorrect; context shows intended word is 'greenery'. Also past tense must be consistent: 'was unmatched'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past habits and check word choice ('greenery').

× So I used to look out at the window from bus.

✓ So I used to look out of the window from the bus.

English uses 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' and requires the definite article 'the' before 'bus' when referring to a specific vehicle in context. Also 'from bus' is ungrammatical; use 'from the bus' or better 'from the bus window' or 'out of the bus window'. Suggestion: Use articles appropriately and correct prepositional phrase 'look out of the window'.

× I like taking photos of everything, but personally I like to take photos of views.

✓ I like taking photos of everything, but personally I prefer to take photos of views.

While the original sentence is grammatically acceptable, using 'prefer to' is more natural to contrast general liking with a specific preference. No -ing correction required, but stylistic improvement: replace repeated 'like' with 'prefer'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' to express a stronger specific preference.

× So whenever I used to go to visit or if I'm in a bus or car, I usually take photos of views and the greenery there.

✓ So whenever I went to visit somewhere or if I'm in a bus or car, I usually take photos of the views and the greenery there.

Mixing 'used to' (past habit) with 'if I'm' (present) and 'usually take' (present) creates tense inconsistency. Choose present for habitual actions that still happen: 'whenever I go' or past for past habits: 'whenever I went'. Here keep present for general habit: 'whenever I go to visit somewhere' or better 'whenever I visit somewhere'. Also add 'the' before 'views' and 'greenery' for naturalness. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent: use present simple for current habitual actions ('whenever I visit, I usually take photos').

× I like both mountains or sea, but if I have to choose I think I will choose mountains oversea because I think mountain itself is a very peace and calming place.

✓ I like both the mountains and the sea, but if I have to choose I think I will choose the mountains over the sea because I think the mountains themselves are very peaceful and calming places.

Use 'both... and' rather than 'both... or'. Articles are needed before 'mountains' and 'sea' when speaking generally: 'the mountains and the sea'. 'Oversea' is incorrect; use 'over the sea' or 'over the sea' as comparison 'over the sea' but correct phrase is 'the mountains over the sea' or 'mountains over the sea'—better: 'the mountains over the sea'. 'Mountain itself is a very peace' has multiple errors: need article 'the', plural agreement 'mountains themselves are', and adjective 'peaceful' not noun 'peace'. Also 'place' should be plural 'places' or singular matching. Ensure subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: Use 'both... and', include articles, correct comparative phrase 'mountains over the sea', and use 'peaceful' and plural agreement.

× There is snow, there is breathtaking and the view there is just wow.

✓ There is snow, the scenery is breathtaking, and the view there is just wow.

'There is breathtaking' is ungrammatical because 'breathtaking' is an adjective needing a noun subject (e.g., 'the scenery is breathtaking'). Combine clauses more smoothly and remove repetitive 'there is'. Suggestion: Use adjective with a subject ('the scenery is breathtaking') and vary sentence structure for clarity.