Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và tính tự nhiên: sửa lỗi chia động từ, cách diễn đạt cảm giác say xe và mục đích nhìn cảnh. Nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng từ nối để liên kết ý (for example, because, so). Ví dụ, thay “when I traveling” bằng “when I travel”, “helps me realize” nên là “helps me feel better” hoặc “distracts me from the motion”. Cũng nên thay “the round Rd. is winding” bằng “when the road is winding” và nêu một chi tiết cụ thể về cảnh bạn thích.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I often get car sick, and watching the scenery distracts me from the motion. For example, I enjoy watching the countryside and mountain views when the road is winding because the changing landscape keeps my mind occupied.

Sugestão: Cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và đúng ngữ pháp: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề thẳng thắn (“No, I don’t”), sau đó giải thích lý do bằng một hoặc hai câu hỗ trợ. Sửa cấu trúc “I always spend a lot of time to sleep” thành “I usually sleep” và diễn đạt lý do phòng say xe đúng hơn: “because it prevents me from getting car sick”. Tránh từ thừa như “to or somewhere” và những mâu thuẫn cuối câu.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos from the car window. I prefer to sleep during the journey because resting helps me avoid getting car sick, so I rarely use my phone to take pictures.

Sugestão: Cải thiện từ vựng và cấu trúc diễn đạt sở thích: sửa “prefer to see” thành “prefer the sea”, dùng cụm danh từ chính xác (“the sound of the waves”, “fresh air”) và đưa ra lý do rõ ràng. Thêm liên từ (because, for example) để nối ý. Tránh cấu trúc không tự nhiên như “as soon as always have you realize”; hãy dùng câu rõ ràng như “walking along the beach always relaxes me and clears my mind.”

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I love the sound of the waves and the fresh sea air. For example, walking along the beach always relaxes me and helps clear my mind after a stressful week.

× Yes, I always look out the window when I traveling by bus or car because I often get car sick so watching the scenery helps me realize.

✓ Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I often get car sick, so watching the scenery helps me relax.

The verb after 'when' should be simple present 'travel' not 'traveling' (mixing tenses). Also 'helps me realize' is incorrect collocation; likely intended 'helps me relax' or 'helps me feel better.' Use a comma before 'so' when joining two independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'I travel' and a suitable verb like 'relax' or 'feel better.'

× For example, I like to look at the countryside or mountains when the round Rd. is winding.

✓ For example, I like to look at the countryside or mountains when the road is winding.

'Round Rd.' is unnecessary abbreviation and 'round' is incorrect here; use 'road.' 'Winding' is fine as a present participle describing the road, but avoid abbreviations. Ensure noun capitalization and use 'the road is winding.'

× Umm no I don't. I always spend a lot of time to sleep when I travel or to or somewhere by the car because I think it's have me don't get a car sick. Yes.

✓ No, I don't. I usually spend a lot of time sleeping when I travel by car because I think it helps me not get car sick.

Use 'usually' rather than 'always' when describing habitual but not absolute actions. The verb pattern after 'spend time' requires gerund 'sleeping' not 'to sleep.' Remove extra 'to or or somewhere.' 'It's have me don't get a car sick' is ungrammatical: correct to 'it helps me not get car sick.' Use 'by car' for travel by vehicle. Suggestion: 'I usually spend a lot of time sleeping when I travel by car because I think it helps me not get car sick.'

× I always prefer to see because I love the sound of the waves and the fresh.

✓ I always prefer the sea because I love the sound of the waves and the fresh air.

'Prefer to see' is incorrect collocation; use 'prefer the sea' or 'prefer the sea to the mountains.' 'The fresh' is incomplete—use 'fresh air.' Keep simple present 'prefer' for habitual preference. Suggestion: 'I always prefer the sea because I love the sound of the waves and the fresh air.'

× For example, walking along the beach as soon as always have you realize and clear my mind.

✓ For example, walking along the beach always helps me relax and clears my mind.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and ungrammatical fragments ('as soon as always have you realize'). Use subject 'walking along the beach' with verb 'helps' and 'clears my mind.' Maintain subject-verb agreement: 'helps me relax and clears my mind.' Suggestion: 'Walking along the beach always helps me relax and clears my mind.'