Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı; gramer hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlikler düzeltilmeli. Örneğin zaman uyumu, tekil/çoğul kullanımı ve doğru kelime seçimleri üzerinde çalışın. Ayrıca cevap doğrudan soru ile başlatılmalı (ör. "Yes, I often look out the window") ve ardından bağlaçlarla destekleyici detaylar verilmelidir. Spesifik olarak: 'used to' yerine uygun kullanım, 'when we went to bedroom' ifadesinin anlamının ne olduğu (muhtemelen 'when I was a child' veya 'when we went on trips') düzeltilmeli, 'watch' yerine 'watched' veya 'looked' ve 'a clouds' yerine 'clouds' kullanılmalı.

Exemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. When I was a child I used to stare at the passing landscape because it helped me relax. For example, I loved watching clouds and trees glide by on long journeys.

Sugestão: Cevap daha açık ve mantıklı düzenlenmeli; kelime dağarcığı ve cümle yapısı geliştirilmelidir. 'I passionate to' yerine doğru yapı 'I am passionate about' kullanılmalı. Anlamı belirsiz ifadeler ('in actually stumble', 'haven't any facilities', 'picked some forests in Bakker') açıklığa kavuşturulmalı veya çıkarılmalı. Destekleyici detay verirken bağlaçlar (for example, however) kullanılmalı ve spesifik örnekler net olmalı.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside, especially in suburban areas. I am passionate about photographing quiet streets and fields because they look more natural. However, in some places there are few facilities for tourists, so I sometimes focus on nearby forests or parks that I find interesting.

Sugestão: Cevap kısa ve karışık; tercih açık ama nedenler mantıklı ve dilbilgisel olarak yanlış. 'I prefer the sea' diye başlanmalı. 'sea fills me more peaceful' yanlış ilgeç ve sıfat kullanımına sahip, doğru yapı 'the sea makes me feel peaceful' olmalı. 'I used to live in bedroom' ifadesi anlamsız - muhtemelen 'I used to live near the sea' veya 'I spent a lot of time at the seaside as a child' olmalı. Sebep verirken iki cümleyi bağlayıcı ile birleştirin.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because it makes me feel calm and relaxed. When I was a child I spent a lot of time by the seaside, so I developed a habit of visiting beaches whenever I can.

× Yes, I used to look at window when I was child.

✓ Yes, I used to look out of the window when I was a child.

The sentence has issues with preposition and article use and present/past form consistency. 'Look at window' should be 'look out of the window' or 'look at the window' to use the correct preposition and include the definite article 'the'. Also 'when I was child' lacks the article 'a'. The tense 'used to' is correct to describe a past habit; keep it. Suggestion: add 'out of' and 'the' and 'a' -> 'used to look out of the window when I was a child.'

× When we went to bedroom I always watch outside and playing.

✓ When we went to the bedroom I would always watch outside and play.

Multiple problems: missing article before 'bedroom' and incorrect verb forms. 'Always watch' in a past context should be 'would always watch' or 'always watched'; 'and playing' should be base verb 'play' to match 'watch' or combined with 'would'. Use 'would always watch ... and play' or 'always watched ... and played'. Suggestion: use consistent past habitual form: 'would always watch outside and play.'

× I really desire to see a clouds.

✓ I really desired to see clouds.

Article and tense issues: 'a clouds' is incorrect because 'clouds' is plural and should not take 'a'. Also sentence context is past habit, so 'desire' should be past 'desired' or use 'used to want to'. Suggestion: use 'I really wanted to see clouds' or 'I really desired to see clouds.'

× Yes, especially suburban areas.

✓ Yes, especially in suburban areas.

Missing preposition: say 'in suburban areas' to indicate location. Also sentence fragment could be expanded to 'Yes, especially in suburban areas I take photos.' Suggestion: include 'in' before 'suburban areas.'

× I passionate to take pictures of them, but in actually stumble they haven't any facilities.

✓ I am passionate about taking pictures of them, but in fact they don't have any facilities.

Multiple errors: 'passionate' needs auxiliary and preposition: 'am passionate about'. Verb forms: 'to take' becomes gerund after 'passionate about': 'taking pictures'. 'in actually stumble' seems to aim for 'in actual fact' or 'actually', use 'but actually'. 'they haven't any facilities' is nonstandard; use 'they don't have any facilities.' Suggestion: 'I am passionate about taking pictures of them, but actually they don't have any facilities.'

× About the urban areas, I generally picked some forests in Bakker.

✓ Regarding urban areas, I generally choose some parks in Bakker.

This sentence has tense and word choice issues. 'Picked' is past; context unclear but 'generally' indicates habitual action so use present 'choose' or past habit 'generally picked' consistently. 'Forests in Bakker' may be wrong word 'forests' vs 'parks' and 'Bakker' might be a place; choose appropriate noun. Suggestion: use present habitual 'I generally choose' and a suitable noun like 'parks' or keep 'forests' if correct: 'I generally choose some forests in Bakker.'

× I prefer a sea because sea fills me more peaceful and I used to live in bedroom when I was a child.

✓ I prefer the sea because the sea makes me feel more peaceful, and I used to live in a bedroom when I was a child.

Article and verb choice issues: 'a sea' is incorrect; use 'the sea' when referring to the sea in general. 'sea fills me more peaceful' is ungrammatical; use 'makes me feel more peaceful.' 'I used to live in bedroom' needs article 'a' before 'bedroom'. Also keep 'used to' for past habit. Suggestion: 'I prefer the sea because the sea makes me feel more peaceful, and I used to live in a bedroom when I was a child.'

× Uh, it's a habit for me.

✓ Uh, it's a habit for me.

This sentence is acceptable as is. No correction needed. Explanation: The sentence is grammatically correct: 'it's a habit for me' properly uses contraction and noun phrase. No change required.