Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and natural, with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. To improve, be more concise and avoid redundancy (e.g. “look out of the bus or car window” could be shortened). Add one specific example to make your response more vivid and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep the total to no more than five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel because I enjoy watching the sky and cityscape. For example, last month I saw a row of colorful buildings in Shanghai and took photos to remember the trip. Also, I often note interesting places I might want to visit later.

Sugestão: The idea is clear, but the answer has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases (“I get to,” “I intend to forget about the memory lately”). Improve accuracy by using correct tense and clearer wording, and add a brief, specific example. Use a linking word to connect reason and result.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually take photos through the window because I don’t want to forget special moments. For example, I photographed a dramatic sunset last weekend, so I can look back at the image later and remember how it felt.

Sugestão: This is a strong, well-structured answer: clear preference, reasons, and a result. To improve further, vary vocabulary slightly (e.g. use “coast” or “shoreline”) and add a short personal example to make it more specific. Keep it concise and use a linking word between reasons.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and find the coastline calming. For instance, I usually visit the beach on Sundays to swim and unwind after a busy week, which helps me recharge for work.

× Yes, I usually look out of the bus or car window because I enjoy watching the sky and the cityscape.

✓ Yes, I usually look out of the bus or car window because I enjoy watching the sky and the cityscape.

No correction needed for this sentence. The verb + -ing form 'watching' is correctly used after 'enjoy'. Keep as is.

× Each city has its own interesting scenery and I often take photos so I can remember the trip later.

✓ Each city has its own interesting scenery, and I often take photos so I can remember the trip later.

This sentence is grammatically correct regarding participles, but add a comma before 'and' to improve sentence structure and clarity when connecting two independent clauses. The present participle form is not an issue here.

× Yes, I usually take photos of outside the window because I get to.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos outside the window because I can.

Original phrase 'take photos of outside the window' has awkward preposition use; 'outside the window' is the correct location phrase. 'Because I get to' is informal and unclear; 'because I can' is clearer. The main issues involve preposition and modal phrasing; present participle form is not required.

× I intend to forget about the memory lately so I take a photo to remind that things and I can rewatch that photos again.

✓ I have been forgetting some memories lately, so I take photos to remind myself of those moments and I can look at the photos again.

Multiple tense and word choice problems: 'intend to forget... lately' mismatches intention with recent ongoing action; use present perfect continuous 'have been forgetting' to express recent trend. 'take a photo to remind that things' is ungrammatical: use 'take photos to remind myself of those moments.' 'rewatch that photos' has article/number and verb choice errors: use 'look at the photos again.' Corrections ensure consistent present-perfect context and correct pronoun and plural agreement.

× I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy swimming and I'm quite good at it, so I often go to the beach to swim.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy swimming and I'm quite good at it, so I often go to the beach to swim.

This sentence is correct; articles 'the sea' and 'the mountains' are used appropriately to refer to general categories. No change needed.

× I also find the coastal scenery very calming and it helps me relax after a busy week.

✓ I also find the coastal scenery very calming, and it helps me relax after a busy week.

Sentence is grammatically correct; adding a comma before 'and' improves readability when joining two independent clauses. Present participle use is not an issue.