Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g. remove repeated words, use correct nouns) and use vocabulary relevant to scenery (landscape, rivers, fields). Keep to no more than five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus because watching the landscape helps me relax. For example, I often see rivers and green fields, which are calming, and I sometimes notice changing weather or light as we drive.

Sugestão: Make your meaning clear and avoid confusing phrasing. Answer directly, then explain briefly why and how you take photos. Use correct verb forms and clear linking words (for example, because/so/then). Be specific about when you review the photos.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car because I want to remember places I pass. For instance, I save interesting views on my phone and later I look at them to plan future visits or to share with friends.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference with a clear reason and one specific supporting detail. Fix unclear expressions (e.g. 'coach' is incorrect here). Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas. Keep it natural and concise.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I live in Shenzhen and the coastline is nearby, so I can visit beaches easily. Also, I enjoy listening to waves and walking along the shore to relax.

× Yes, I like looking looking out of the window while traveling by bus because it's very clean.

✓ Yes, I like looking out of the window while traveling by bus because it's very relaxing.

The sentence repeats 'looking' (typo) and uses 'clean' incorrectly to describe scenery. 'Like' is correctly followed by a gerund (looking). Replace the duplicate word, change the preposition to 'out of', and use an appropriate adjective 'relaxing' to describe the effect of scenery, making the meaning clear.

× I enjoy watching and change landscape especially fuel.

✓ I enjoy watching the changing landscape, especially fields.

The original mixes verbs and incorrect nouns. Use the gerund 'changing' to describe the landscape and replace 'fuel' (incorrect word) with a plausible noun like 'fields'. The structure 'enjoy watching the changing landscape' is grammatically correct.

× A small riverage and can help me relax and pass the time.

✓ A small river can help me relax and pass the time.

'riverage' is not a standard word; use 'river'. Remove the extraneous conjunction 'and' and ensure the sentence has a subject ('A small river') and a verb ('can help'), producing a complete clause.

× I usually take the form of the skin scanning outside the car window while traveling because I like to capture the view and keep some memory on my phone.

✓ I usually take photos through the car window while traveling because I like to capture the view and keep memories on my phone.

The phrase 'form of the skin scanning' is incorrect. Use 'take photos' and 'through the car window'. 'Keep some memory' should be 'keep memories'. The gerund usage is not needed here; the corrected verbs match the intended meaning.

× Later when I come I will come back at the phone.

✓ Later, when I get home, I will look at them on my phone.

The original is unclear and ungrammatical ('come I will come back at the phone'). Use a clear time clause 'when I get home' and the phrasal verb 'look at them on my phone' to express reviewing photos later.

× They might they meet some generally at the place I will visit.

✓ I might visit those places again in the future.

The original contains repeated words and unclear structure. Rephrase to a clear, grammatical sentence that fits the intended meaning: considering revisiting places seen in photos.

× I prefer the sea because I live in Shenzhen and my city is very close to the coach I'm going to.

✓ I prefer the sea because I live in Shenzhen and my city is very close to the coast.

'coach' is an incorrect word here; 'coast' (the seaside) is appropriate. Ensure present tense 'live' and 'is' are correct. The clause 'I'm going to' is unnecessary and confusing, so remove it to make the sentence concise and grammatical.