Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 答题要直接回应问题，先给出简洁的主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持。避免重复和语法错误，注意时态和冠词的使用（例如：“I always look out of the window”而不是“I always looking”）。可把例子放在最后并用连接词（e.g. “for example”, “last Sunday”）衔接，使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching the changing landscapes because it relaxes me and helps pass the time. For example, last Sunday I watched farmers working in the fields and it made the journey very pleasant.

Sugestão: 回答要简洁、连贯，避免填充词和重复（例如删除多余的“I can”）。注意主谓一致和时态（“it makes me feel”而不是“it make me feel”）。可以加一两句说明拍照的原因和一个具体例子来丰富内容，并用连接词如“because”或“so”衔接。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because it allows me to keep memories of the places I pass. For instance, I once photographed a colorful sunset over a river and later used the picture as my phone wallpaper.

Sugestão: 回答应先直接表明偏好，然后给出清晰具体的理由。注意语法结构（例如“because climbing mountains makes me tired”），并避免含糊的自我描述（“somewhat older”可换成更自然的表达如“not very fond of strenuous activity”）。用连接词如“so”或“because”使理由与主句衔接更顺畅。

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I find it more relaxing and less physically demanding than hiking in the mountains. Walking along the beach helps me calm down, whereas climbing steep trails usually leaves me exhausted.

× Why? Why traveling by car or bus I always looking out of the window and and looking at the beautiful sceneries outside of the window. Umm I remember and last Sunday.

✓ Why? When traveling by car or bus, I always look out of the window and look at the beautiful scenery outside. Umm, I remember last Sunday.

原句中“Why traveling by car or bus I always looking...”在时态与句子结构上有问题。根据语法，表示“当……时”应使用when或while引导从句，并且主句需用一般现在时（习惯性动作），动词用原形或第三人称单数形式。因此将结构改为“When traveling by car or bus, I always look out of the window and look at the beautiful scenery outside.” 另外，“scenery”通常作不可数名词，不用复数，且去掉多余的“and”。“I remember and last Sunday”语序混乱，应改为“I remember last Sunday.” 建议：使用when/while引导时间状语从句；习惯性动作用一般现在时；不可数名词用单数形式；注意删除重复词。

× Yes, I like taking photos of scenery outside the car window and because it make me feel I can get I can I can get the photos forever and I recall the.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of the scenery outside the car window because it makes me feel I can keep the photos forever, and I recall those moments.

原句存在动词形式、主谓一致和句子残缺问题。“because it make me feel”中make应为第三人称单数makes以与主语it一致（语法类型归为主谓一致，但也涉及现在分词用法和句子结构），所以改为“because it makes me feel”。“I can get the photos forever”表达不自然，改为“I can keep the photos forever”更贴切。“and I recall the.”不完整，需补全为“and I recall those moments.” 建议：注意主谓一致（第三人称单数加-s）；选择合适动词表达持续保存照片；确保句子完整。

× I do prefer the sea and because I am somewhat older and climbing mountains and makes me feel tired but umm the same makes me calm.

✓ I do prefer the sea because I am somewhat older and climbing mountains makes me feel tired, but the sea makes me feel calm.

原句中“climbing mountains and makes me feel tired”结构错误，动名词短语作主语时，谓语动词需与其一致，应为“climbing mountains makes me feel tired”。此外“and because...”重复连接词不必要，应改为一并说明原因；“the same makes me calm”表达不准确，应明确指代“the sea”。建议：注意动名词作主语时动词的单数形式；避免多余的连词；确保代词指代明确。