Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 応答は質問に答えていますが、文法や語順の誤り、語の選択ミス、冗長さが見られます。まず主題文で直接答え（Yes, I do.）をはっきり示し、その後で具体的な例を1～2件だけ挙げてください。名詞の単数・複数、前置詞（in/at/on）、関係代名詞の省略などを直し、語彙は“architecture”“local shops”“people’s clothing”のように自然な表現に置き換えましょう。また文章は3文以内に抑えると効果的です。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy looking at different landscapes while travelling by bus or car, especially the architecture and local shops in my hometown. For example, I often notice how people dress and how restaurants differ from place to place, which makes the journey interesting.

Sugestão: 良い点は旅行中に写真を撮る習慣を述べていることですが、文法（特に助動詞・時制）と語句の選び方に改善が必要です。“when I find something worth seeing”や“when we passed Mount Fuji”のように自然な表現を使い、目的（to keep memories）を明確に一文で述べましょう。不要なフレーズ（add some shapes）は意味が不明瞭なので避けてください。回答は2～3文で簡潔に。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window when I see something worth photographing. For example, when we passed Mount Fuji I took many pictures to remember the view and share it with my family later.

Sugestão: 意見は明確ですが、“hate”は強すぎるためフォーマルな場面では避けましょう（dislike is better）。単語の複数形や語順（listening to music）を修正し、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると説得力が増します。例えば海でのアクティビティや山が苦手な具体的な状況を短く添えると良いです。回答は2–3文にまとめてください。

Exemplo: I prefer the sea to the mountains. I enjoy relaxing on the beach, reading books and listening to music, whereas I dislike mountain hiking because of insects and steep paths.

× Yes, I always look at a scenery when traveling by bus or car.

✓ Yes, I always look at the scenery when traveling by bus or car.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. Use 'the scenery' to refer to the view in general. Suggestion: remove 'a' before 'scenery'.

× In traveling we can see clearly different landscapes from what I was.

✓ When traveling we can clearly see different landscapes compared to where I was.

Original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect reference 'from what I was'. Use 'when traveling' as the time clause, place the adverb 'clearly' before the verb phrase, and use 'compared to where I was' to make the comparison clear. Suggestion: reorder words and replace 'from what I was' with 'compared to where I was'.

× I always look at in my hometown, the architecture or buildings, the Closings, people they are wearing and a kind of restaurant are totally different.

✓ I always look at my hometown's architecture and buildings; the clothes people wear and the kinds of restaurants are totally different.

Multiple problems: 'look at in my hometown' is wrong preposition placement — use 'look at my hometown's...'. 'Closings' is likely intended as 'clothes' and should be a plural noun; 'people they are wearing' is redundant — use 'the clothes people wear'. 'a kind of restaurant are' has subject-verb disagreement and incorrect article — use 'kinds of restaurants are'. Suggestion: restructure sentence into clear noun phrases and correct word choices and agreement.

× All of them are falling to me, so I enjoy the scenery when traveling.

✓ All of them appeal to me, so I enjoy the scenery when traveling.

'Falling to me' is not correct collocation. The intended meaning is likely 'appeal to me' or 'I like them'. Use 'appeal to me' to express that things are pleasing. Suggestion: replace 'falling to me' with 'appeal to me' or 'I like them'.

× Yes, I always take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when I find what I really be able to see.

✓ Yes, I always take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when I find something really worth seeing.

Phrase 'what I really be able to see' is ungrammatical. Use 'something really worth seeing' to express a notable sight. Suggestion: replace the clause with a clearer noun phrase 'something really worth seeing'.

× For example, I couldn't help but take many photos of Mount Fuji when Michael passed through it.

✓ For example, I couldn't help taking many photos of Mount Fuji when we passed by it.

'Couldn't help but take' is acceptable but 'when Michael passed through it' is odd: 'pass through' is not used for a person passing by a mountain; also unclear who Michael is. If the speaker was traveling with someone, use 'we passed by it'. Use 'passing by' for sights beside the route. Suggestion: use 'couldn't help taking' and 'we passed by it'.

× I always take such photos to keep memories, add some shapes.

✓ I always take such photos to keep memories and capture the scene.

'Add some shapes' is unclear and unnatural. Use 'capture the scene' or 'preserve the moment' to express purpose of photos. Suggestion: replace vague phrase with idiomatic expression.

× I prefer the sea and hate the mountains.

✓ I prefer the sea and hate the mountains.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Note: present simple correctly expresses general preferences.

× I love going to the sea and spending long times lying down on the beach reading books or listening to musics.

✓ I love going to the sea and spending long periods lying on the beach reading books or listening to music.

'Long times' is non-idiomatic; use 'long periods' or 'a long time'. 'Lying down on the beach' can be shortened to 'lying on the beach'. 'Musics' is incorrect plural; 'music' is uncountable. Suggestion: use 'long periods' and 'music'.

× I dislike climbing the mountains because there are a lot of insects there.

✓ I dislike climbing mountains because there are a lot of insects there.

Use plural 'climbing mountains' without 'the' for general activity. The rest is acceptable. Suggestion: remove 'the' before 'mountains' when speaking generally.