Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar and word choice, keep sentences concise, and add a clear topic sentence with one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "go by" not "goes by") and more natural phrases (e.g., "clear my mind" instead of "clear my time"). Also avoid repetition and unnecessary clauses.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I find it relaxing. For example, I like watching the passing buildings and people, which helps me unwind after a busy day. Also, I sometimes notice small everyday scenes that inspire me.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and agreement, and make the response slightly more specific. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one reason and an example. Replace awkward phrases like "have something special where I take photos" with "there is something special worth photographing."

Exemplo: Not really. I only take photos when the view is unexpectedly beautiful or there's something unusual worth photographing. For instance, once I captured a dramatic sunset over the fields from the car window.

Sugestão: Clarify meaning and correct vocabulary and grammar. 'Afraid of hate' is unclear — likely you meant 'heights'. Use correct adjectives ('soothing' not 'smoothing') and verb forms ('helps', 'enjoy'). Keep answer concise: state preference, give a clear reason, and provide a brief example with linking words ('for example', 'because').

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I'm a little afraid of heights and I don't enjoy steep mountain walks. The sea feels soothing and helps me relax; for example, when I'm anxious I like to take a long walk along the beach and enjoy the view.

× I like to watch the sceneries goes by or just observe the people in the streets.

✓ I like to watch the scenery go by or just observe the people in the streets.

Subject-verb agreement and countability: 'scenery' is an uncountable noun so use singular form 'scenery' not 'sceneries'. The verb should agree with the singular uncountable noun; with 'watch ... go by' the base form 'go' is used (not 'goes') because the structure is 'watch + object + base verb'. Suggestion: use 'scenery' and 'go' in this construction.

× I didn't overthink of them, it just helps me to clear my time.

✓ I didn't overthink them; it just helps me to clear my mind.

Verb + preposition and word choice: 'overthink' does not take the preposition 'of' when used transitively, so use 'overthink them'. Also 'clear my time' is unnatural; the intended meaning is likely 'clear my mind'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity. Suggestion: say 'I didn't overthink them' and 'it helps me clear my mind'.

× Not really, only when the scenery was unexpectedly beautiful or have something special where I take photos.

✓ Not really, only when the scenery is unexpectedly beautiful or has something special, then I take photos.

Tense and subject-verb agreement: The question is general/present habit, so use present tense 'is' not past 'was'. Also 'scenery' (singular/uncountable) requires 'has' not 'have'. The clause ordering and connector needed correction for natural English. Suggestion: use present tense for habitual actions and match subject and verb ('scenery has').

× And most of the time I just keep it in my mind.

✓ Most of the time I just keep it in my mind.

Redundant conjunction/article: Beginning a sentence with 'And' is informal; remove 'And' to be more appropriate for formal speaking. Otherwise sentence is grammatical. Suggestion: omit leading 'And' in formal responses.

× Do you prefer the mountains or the sea? Student: I prefer the sea because I'm a little afraid of hate, so I don't enjoy mountain walks.

✓ I prefer the sea because I'm a little afraid of heights, so I don't enjoy mountain walks.

Word choice / singular-plural issue: 'hate' is incorrect here; the intended noun is 'heights'. This is not a pluralization error of a noun but a wrong word. Use 'heights' to express fear of high places. Suggestion: say 'afraid of heights'. Also sentence structure is fine otherwise.

× The sea is more smoothing and help me to relax.

✓ The sea is more soothing and helps me to relax.

Incorrect use of adjective/adverb and subject-verb agreement: 'smoothing' (present participle) is wrong; the correct adjective is 'soothing'. Also 'The sea' is singular so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'. Suggestion: use 'soothing' and 'helps'.

× For example, every time I feel anxious, I would like to take a long walk by the sea and enjoying the scenery.

✓ For example, every time I feel anxious, I like to take a long walk by the sea and enjoy the scenery.

Verb tense and parallel structure: 'would like to' changes meaning to conditional/wish; for habitual action use present simple 'I like to'. Also 'and enjoying' breaks parallelism; use the base verb 'enjoy' to match 'take'. Suggestion: use 'I like to ... and enjoy ...' for regular habits.