Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response grammatically correct, more concise, and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers and repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I like noticing changes in the landscape — the trees, fields and buildings — because they make me feel relaxed and cheerful.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer, then give a clear, specific reason using linking words. Remove unclear phrases and avoid filler words. One concise example of a situation helps.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos from a moving car because the pictures often come out blurry. For instance, when I tried once, most shots were ruined by motion, so I prefer to take photos when we stop.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference sentence, then support it with two clear, specific reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, and) and correct grammar; avoid confusing phrases.

Exemplo: I prefer the mountains because they offer fresh air and peaceful surroundings. For example, hiking in the hills helps me breathe deeply and relax, and I enjoy the views and quiet more than busy beaches.

× Yes, I do because there is very interesting when I look out the window at the scenery, I can see the difference, uh, trees and the land and it's give me a sense of happiness.

✓ Yes, I do because it is very interesting when I look out the window at the scenery. I can see the differences, such as trees and the land, and it gives me a sense of happiness.

The original uses 'there is very interesting', which incorrectly uses a 'there be' structure. Replace with 'it is very interesting' to describe a situation. Also fix subject-verb agreement ('differences' plural to match examples) and verb form 'gives' for third person singular. Suggestion: use 'it is' to introduce general descriptions and ensure verbs agree with their subjects. Grammar problem types involved also include Subject-verb agreement (27) and Third person singular issue (2), but only the 'There be issue' was corrected as requested.

× No, I don't, because it's not easy to take the images. You know, when I was in a car and the car is moving, it's not easy to catch the clear images. So umm, I need to weigh the car. Stop.

✓ No, I don't, because it's not easy to take clear pictures. When I am in a car and the car is moving, it's not easy to capture clear images. So, um, I need the car to stop.

'Take the images' is acceptable but 'take clear pictures' is more natural. 'When I was in a car' mixes past with present general statement; use present continuous 'When I am in a car' or simple present for habitual actions. 'Catch the clear images' is awkward; use 'capture clear images'. 'I need to weigh the car. Stop.' is incorrect and likely a misphrase; corrected to 'I need the car to stop.' Suggestions: use natural verbs ('take' -> 'take pictures', 'capture') and match tense for general/habitual situations; express requests with 'I need the car to stop' or 'I need it to stop.'

× For my perspective I prefer the mountains because is can help me on why when I see the mountain I can flash the blast the flash out fresh air and I can also enjoy the nature.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer the mountains because they can help me: when I see the mountains I can breathe fresh air and I can also enjoy nature.

Multiple errors: missing subject with 'is can help' changed to 'they can help' to agree in number with 'mountains' (third person plural). Phrases like 'flash the blast the flash out fresh air' are incorrect and nonsensical; replaced with 'breathe fresh air' which conveys likely meaning. 'Enjoy the nature' changed to 'enjoy nature' (no article). Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree in number, use clear verbs for actions (breathe), and avoid unnecessary articles before uncountable nouns like 'nature'.