Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and directly answer the question first. Avoid repetition (e.g. "used to") and unclear phrases (e.g. "as I get"). Provide one or two specific reasons or a brief example to support your answer, and use linking words like "however" or "because" to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I usually travel by car rather than by bus because I find it more comfortable. When I travel by car I often look out of the window to enjoy the passing scenery, especially when we drive through countryside or mountains because the views are relaxing.

Sugestão: This is a generally good, relevant answer but avoid hesitations and small errors ("it it"). Replace vague phrases like "seize the scenery" with clearer expressions. Use a linking word to contrast the two ideas (e.g. "however").

Exemplo: I sometimes take one or two photos of interesting scenery through the car window; however, most of the time I prefer to watch and enjoy the view without using my phone so I can remember it better.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons and a brief contrast sentence. Avoid repetition ("which is mostly which is mostly") and be precise about why you like each option.

Exemplo: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy cool weather and hiking in high-altitude landscapes. However, I also like the sea occasionally for relaxing on the beach and swimming during summer.

× I mostly travel by car as I don't like to travel by bus because of many reasons.

✓ I mostly travel by car because I don't like travelling by bus for many reasons.

'because of many reasons' is awkward; use 'for many reasons'. Also keep gerund 'travelling' for parallel structure; plural 'reasons' is fine. Use 'because' to combine clauses smoothly.

× But yes when I do travel earlier I used to like to look out of the window when I used to travel by car but recently I have found middle seat to be more appealing to me as I get.

✓ But yes, when I used to travel earlier I liked to look out of the window when I travelled by car, but recently I have found the middle seat more appealing.

Mixing 'do travel earlier' with 'used to' is incorrect. Use 'used to' or past simple consistently for past habits ('I used to' or 'I liked'). 'Travelled' is past tense. Add the definite article 'the' before 'middle seat'. Remove the incomplete ending 'as I get'.

× I do sometimes take photos of the scenery outside the car window, but it it might be only one or two.

✓ I sometimes take photos of the scenery outside the car window, but it might be only one or two.

Use simple present 'I sometimes take' instead of 'I do sometimes take' for natural speech. Remove duplicate 'it'. Keep 'might be only one or two' to express frequency.

× Most of the time I like to seize the scenery or the view that I get to see and focus on it rather than being on my phone.

✓ Most of the time I like to take in the scenery or the view I get to see and focus on it rather than being on my phone.

'Seize the scenery' is unusual; use 'take in' to mean appreciate. 'That I get to see' can be shortened to 'I get to see'. Maintain gerund 'being on my phone' is fine.

× Most of the time I do prefer mountains as I love cold regions which are mostly which is mostly available near mountainous regions, but at times I do prefer sea as well.

✓ Most of the time I prefer the mountains because I love cold regions, which are mostly found near mountainous areas, but sometimes I prefer the sea as well.

Avoid redundant phrases 'which are mostly which is mostly'. Use 'prefer the mountains' and include 'the' before 'mountains' and 'sea' for specificity. 'Found near mountainous areas' is correct phrasing. Use 'sometimes' rather than 'at times' for smoothness.