Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and correct grammar to make the answer more natural and effective. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details and use linking words. Also correct small errors (e.g., “if I am so exhausted” → “if I am very tired”; “I don't pay to attention” → “I don't pay attention”). Keep the response to no more than five sentences.

Exemplo: Actually, I don't often look out the window when I travel by bus or car. Instead, I usually use my phone or read a book, and if I am very tired I sometimes take a short nap. However, when the landscape looks interesting I will glance outside and enjoy the view briefly.

Sugestão: This answer is natural and relevant, with clear reasons and a brief example. To improve further, vary vocabulary slightly (avoid casual words like “pics”) and add a linking phrase to make the flow smoother. Keep it concise and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos when I'm traveling, especially if the scenery is spectacular, because I like to keep those memories and sometimes share them on social media.

Sugestão: Organize the answer into one clear topic sentence and two concise supporting sentences. Remove fillers and fix grammar (e.g., “If I want an adventure, I go to the mountains for hiking”; “I enjoy spending time by the sea, swimming and relaxing with friends”). Use linking words like “however” or “on the other hand” to compare preferences. Keep the whole answer under five sentences.

Exemplo: It depends on my mood and the season. If I want an adventure, I usually go to the mountains to hike and explore. However, when I need to relax, I prefer the sea because I can swim and unwind with friends.

× Sometimes I uh, use my phone or read the book, uh, if I so exhausted I uh, can take a nap and uh, I uh, don't pay to attention to it.

✓ Sometimes I use my phone or read a book; if I am so exhausted, I can take a nap and I don't pay attention to it.

Error type 8: Incorrect verb + -ing use is present in 'read the book' (article and noun form) and the structure 'if I so exhausted' lacks the present participle or linking verb. The phrase 'pay to attention' incorrectly inserts 'to'. Correct form uses the verb 'read' with a noun 'a book', the linking verb 'am' before the adjective 'so exhausted', and 'pay attention' (no 'to'). Suggestion: include the appropriate auxiliary verb (am) for states, use correct article with singular countable nouns ('a book'), and use fixed verb phrases such as 'pay attention'.

× I often take photos when I'm traveling, especially when the scenery is spectacular, and I enjoy keeping these pics as memories and sometimes sharing them on social media.

✓ I often take photos when I'm traveling, especially when the scenery is spectacular; I enjoy keeping these pictures as memories and sometimes sharing them on social media.

Error type 6: Minor register and word choice issue: 'pics' is informal; while not strictly grammatical, replacing with 'pictures' suits a formal response. The sentence is otherwise correct in present tense. Suggestion: choose appropriate vocabulary for context and maintain parallel structure ('keeping' and 'sharing').

× To be honest, it depends on my mood and the season.

✓ To be honest, it depends on my mood and the season.

Error type 6: Sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and needs no change. Included to show it's fine; ensure verb 'depends' agrees with singular subject 'it'. No further action necessary.

× So if I want an adventure travel, I head to the mountains for hiking.

✓ So if I want an adventurous trip, I head to the mountains for hiking.

Error type 8: 'adventure travel' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use adjective 'adventurous' with noun 'trip' or 'travel' as uncountable. Suggestion: use 'an adventurous trip' or 'adventure travel' revised to 'adventure travel' with different structure; here 'adventurous trip' is natural. The rest of the clause correctly uses present tense for habitual action.

× But when I uh wish umm to relax, I enjoy spend time by the sea with my friends, swimming and bus.

✓ But when I wish to relax, I enjoy spending time by the sea with my friends, swimming and boating.

Error type 8 (verb + -ing) and word choice: 'enjoy spend' is incorrect; 'enjoy' must be followed by a gerund 'spending'. Also 'bus' is likely a mistake for 'boat' or 'boating'; 'bus' does not fit with swimming as an activity by the sea. Suggestion: use the gerund after 'enjoy' and choose appropriate activity vocabulary ('boating' or 'relaxing on the beach').