Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise, correct tenses and grammar, avoid fillers (uh), and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use simple past for childhood memories and present simple for current habits.

Exemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, when I was a child travelling to the city for school, I used to watch lakes, rivers and green hills pass by, which I always found very calming.

Sugestão: Remove hesitations and improve sentence clarity. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a clear reason and a specific example. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas and correct grammar (e.g., "we have to go to a fixed destination").

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I travel to set destinations and rarely stop. For instance, if I see a striking sunset or a beautiful field, I quickly take a picture through the window to remember it.

Sugestão: Give a clear, single-sentence preference followed by one or two specific reasons. Avoid laughter or repeated words, and correct unclear vocabulary ("hemeloids" and "pieces" seem incorrect). Explain briefly why the sea appeals to you and include a linking word like because or since.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I grew up in a landlocked area and I rarely saw coastlines. Therefore I find the ocean fascinating and I enjoy taking photos of waves and sandy beaches whenever I can.

× I remember my childhood times, uh, I go to city for study between this time, I used to see mesmerizing scene of lakes, rivers, mountains and the greenery hills.

✓ I remember my childhood; at that time I went to the city to study and used to see mesmerizing scenes of lakes, rivers, mountains, and green hills.

The original mixes present tense 'I go' with past context 'I remember my childhood' and has plural and article issues. Use past tense 'went' because the action occurred in the past, and 'used to' correctly indicates a past habitual action. Also change 'scene' to plural 'scenes' and 'greenery hills' to 'green hills' for natural English. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for memories and pluralize countable nouns. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car windows.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window.

The noun 'window' refers to the window of the vehicle in general; 'car window' as a singular or uncountable reference is more natural when speaking about looking out from a car. Using 'windows' is not strictly wrong but can sound odd here. Suggestion: use 'car window' as a set phrase when referring to the view from a vehicle. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Uh, because we are we have to go on the fixed destination and I can explore by eyes and if if the beauty attracts on me.

✓ Uh, because we have to go to a fixed destination, I can only explore with my eyes, and if the beauty attracts me, I take photos.

The original has redundant words ('we are we have'), incorrect prepositions ('go on the fixed destination' -> 'go to a fixed destination'), awkward phrasing ('explore by eyes' -> 'explore with my eyes'), incorrect verb usage ('attracts on me' -> 'attracts me'), and missing main verb for the final action. Rewritten to correct prepositions, remove redundancy, and provide a clear main clause. Suggestion: simplify sentences, ensure correct prepositions, and include a clear subject and verb for each clause. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So at that time only capture the pictures from windows.

✓ So at that time I only captured pictures from the window.

The context describes a past habit, so use past tense 'captured' instead of present 'capture'. Also add subject 'I' and adjust noun 'window' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: match tense to surrounding context and include explicit subject. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Ha ha, I do feel for for the sea because I grew up in hemeloids and I helped see number of uh mountains in my country and we are landlocked so I am eager to see and click the picture of pieces and and the scene.

✓ Ha ha, I do prefer the sea because I grew up in a landlocked area and have already seen many mountains in my country, so I am eager to see and take pictures of the sea and its scenery.

Many issues: 'feel for the sea' should be 'prefer the sea' for meaning; 'grew up in hemeloids' is unclear—likely 'in a landlocked area'; 'helped see' is incorrect and changed to 'have already seen' (present perfect to indicate experience); 'number of mountains' -> 'many mountains'; 'click the picture of pieces' is incorrect and changed to 'take pictures of the sea and its scenery'. Prepositions and verb choices were corrected for clarity. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs ('prefer', 'have seen', 'take pictures') and correct prepositions/articles ('in a landlocked area', 'of the sea'). Grammar problem type ID:11