Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Bạn cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát âm và dùng từ cho chính xác; trả lời nên rõ ràng với 1 câu chủ đề rồi 1–2 câu hỗ trợ cụ thể. Ví dụ: nói rõ lí do thuận tiện (nhanh, dễ sửa) và tránh lỗi như 'Is can' và từ sai ('ban' thay vì 'pen').

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I need to correct mistakes or rearrange sentences, typing lets me do it quickly without wasting paper.

Sugestão: Cần tổ chức câu rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và tiếng ngập ngừng. Trả lời bằng 1 câu chủ đề về việc dùng desktop rồi nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể (phần mềm, màn hình lớn).

Exemplo: Yes, I type on a desktop every day because my major is marketing and I often use editing software that works better on a desktop with a large monitor. This helps me work more efficiently on projects and presentations.

Sugestão: Sửa ngữ pháp thời quá khứ và trật tự từ; giảm lặp từ. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề 'I learned...' rồi cho thêm chi tiết về độ tuổi hoặc nội dung học để cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a child at school. We had a computer class where the teacher showed us basic typing skills and proper finger placement.

Sugestão: Cần rõ ràng và cụ thể: nêu ít nhất một phương pháp cụ thể và cách bạn thực hiện (ví dụ các trang luyện gõ, luyện tập hàng ngày). Tránh tiếng ngập ngừng và từ sai; dùng linking words để mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing websites such as TypingClub every day. I usually spend 15–20 minutes on exercises and track my accuracy and speed to see progress.

× I think typing is very convenient. Is can save more money to buy, ban or pencil in.

✓ I think typing is very convenient. It can save money for buying pens or pencils.

'Is can' is incorrect modal construction; use 'it can'. 'Save more money to buy, ban or pencil in' has wrong infinitive and nouns: use 'save money for buying' or 'save money to buy' and correct nouns 'pen'/'pencil'. Also articles and word order corrected.

× Yes I do. I type on the desktop every day because my major is marketing so I need to uh, I need to edit on desktop too much so I when I text or do something I don't quite type on desktop.

✓ Yes, I do. I type on the desktop every day because my major is marketing, so I need to edit on the desktop a lot; however, when I text or do other things I usually do not type on the desktop.

Run-on sentence and tense/aspect clarity: 'too much' used awkwardly; 'I when I text' word order wrong. Use commas and conjunctions to join clauses, 'do not' for negative present, and 'usually' for frequency. Maintain present tense consistency.

× When I was as a kid in my school they have a computer subject.

✓ When I was a kid at school, they had a computer class.

Time reference 'When I was a kid' requires past tense 'had' not 'have'. Preposition 'at school' is correct and 'computer class' is more natural than 'computer subject'. Removed extra 'as'.

× In this subject they they teach me how to use the the keyboard.

✓ In that class they taught me how to use the keyboard.

Shift to past tense 'taught' to match past time frame. Remove duplicated words 'they they' and 'the the'. Use 'that class' to refer back and 'the keyboard' with single article.

× Nowadays there are many F uh, website to help you uh, improve your typing skill, for example, and typing to wrap a bike umm, practice higher writings everyday is uh, a way how I.

✓ Nowadays there are many websites to help you improve your typing skills; for example, typing practice websites and daily writing exercises help me improve.

Incorrect noun forms and gerund usage: 'website' should be plural 'websites'; 'typing skill' -> 'typing skills'; awkward fragments like 'and typing to wrap a bike' unclear and removed. Use gerunds 'typing practice' and 'writing exercises' and proper adverb 'everyday' or 'every day' (here 'daily'). Clarified sentence structure and completed the idea.