Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct word choice; start with a clear topic sentence, correct misused words (e.g., 'traffic' → 'typing'), avoid repetition, and give one brief reason with a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' sparingly and correctly.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use a smartphone and laptop most of the time. For example, I type notes on my laptop during lectures, which is faster and easier to organize than handwritten notes.

Sugestão: Good direct answer and relevant details. Improve naturalness by removing repetition and polishing grammar (e.g., 'on a laptop keyboard every day' instead of 'every day in laptop keyboard'). Add one linking phrase to make it flow.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually type on a laptop keyboard. Since my study materials are computer-based, I practice reading and writing online every day to keep my skills sharp.

Sugestão: Provide a clear time reference and simplify the sentence. Avoid filler words and tense errors. Start with a topic sentence like 'I learned to type when I was in...,' then add one specific supporting detail about the teacher or class.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in class six. Our school introduced computer lessons then, and my computer teacher gave me regular practice exercises that helped me improve.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear process and use correct verb forms. Remove hesitations and combine steps logically with linking words (first, then, finally). Give a specific practice method or resource and mention frequency.

Exemplo: When I realized typing was important, I enrolled in a computer course. First, my trainer taught me proper finger placement; then I practiced daily with online typing exercises, and gradually my speed and accuracy improved.

× Well I usually prefer typing because it is easy for me because of most of the time I use smartphone or laptop.

✓ Well, I usually prefer typing because it is easy for me as I use a smartphone or laptop most of the time.

Pronoun and phrasing: 'because of most of the time I use smartphone or laptop' is incorrect. Use a clause 'as I use a smartphone or laptop most of the time' and include articles ('a smartphone'). This makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× So I I prefer traffic because it's comfortable for me.

✓ So I prefer typing because it's comfortable for me.

The sentence likely contains a typo 'traffic' instead of 'typing' and a duplicated 'I'. Remove the duplicate and correct the word to match context. Ensure subject-verb structure 'I prefer typing' is correct.

× Yes, I usually type on a laptop keyboard.

✓ Yes, I usually type on a laptop keyboard.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. It uses first person present simple correctly to describe habitual action.

× I use it mostly when I'm practicing reading or writing online because my study materials are computer based, so I try to practice every day.

✓ I mostly use it when I'm practicing reading or writing online because my study materials are computer-based, so I try to practice every day.

Word order and compound adjective: Place the adverb 'mostly' before the verb for natural word order. Add a hyphen in 'computer-based' as it modifies 'materials.' The rest of the tense and structure are appropriate.

× Every day in laptop keyboard.

✓ I use the laptop keyboard every day.

Fragment: 'Every day in laptop keyboard' is not a complete sentence. Rearrange to a full sentence with subject and verb: 'I use the laptop keyboard every day.' Include the definite article 'the' for specificity.

× It was since when, uh, I didn't class 6 this time I gave, I gave an opportunity to, uh, improving my computer skill in my school.

✓ It was when I was in class 6 that I was given the opportunity to improve my computer skills at school.

Multiple issues: incorrect tense and word order. Use past simple 'was' for time reference and passive 'was given' to indicate receiving an opportunity. Use 'in class 6' for grade, 'improve my computer skills' (infinitive), and 'at school' for location.

× Uh, our computer teacher, uh, give me an opportunity.

✓ Our computer teacher gave me an opportunity.

Verb tense: 'give' should be changed to past simple 'gave' to match the past time frame established earlier. Remove filler words for clarity.

× So next time I learn at typing on keyboard.

✓ So after that, I learned to type on the keyboard.

Infinitive and tense: Use 'learned to type' for correct verb + infinitive structure and past tense consistency. Add 'the' before 'keyboard' and use 'after that' to connect sequence.

× When I realize, uh, typing is most important.

✓ When I realized that typing was very important,

Tense and clause structure: For a past sequence, use past tense 'realized' and include 'that' to introduce the clause. 'Very important' is more natural than 'most important' in this context. This phrase should lead into the next clause.

× So this time I uh, admitted an uh, computer course last time Our computer trainer uh, suggest me, then I I practice every day.

✓ So I enrolled in a computer course. Our computer trainer suggested it to me, and then I practiced every day.

Multiple issues: 'admitted an computer course' is incorrect—use 'enrolled in a computer course.' Ensure articles: 'a computer course.' Use past tense 'suggested' to match timeline and correct object use 'suggested it to me.' Remove duplicate 'I' and use past tense 'practiced.' Split into two sentences for clarity.

× First of all, uh, slowly, then I then start, then I improving day by day for typing.

✓ At first I started slowly, and then I improved day by day in my typing.

Verb forms and sequence: Use past simple 'started' and past simple 'improved' for completed actions. 'Improving' should be 'improved' to maintain tense consistency. Use 'in my typing' or 'at typing' to clarify the skill being improved.