Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer handwriting because I think when I write notes by hand I remember them more easily. I also find that writing manually makes me easier to support some mistakes in Word choice and spelling. Yes.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Absolutely, because every day I we need to use some chat application like WeChat or WhatsApp. So we need to type words on the keyboard and we also search some information on Google.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
MMM. I think my primary school T uh, period, because we have the, uh, the computer, uh, classes and the teacher, uh, taught us how to use keyboard and uh, also use some application to apply.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think just to like other skills, you need, uh, pay more time into it and practice, uh, typing every day and for one hour, 2 hours, and also, uh, through some apps to.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 总体回答直接且表达了观点,但存在语法错误、词汇使用不当和冗余。建议:1) 修正语法与词序(如“writing manually makes me easier to support some mistakes”不通顺);2) 用更精确的词汇(use “catch” or “notice” mistakes 而非 “support”);3) 控制长度,不超过4-5句;4) 加入一两条具体例子或原因。示例练习:把两句合并为主题句+具体原因,并用连接词。
Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because I remember notes better when I write them by hand. For example, when I handwrite vocabulary, I review it later more easily and tend to notice spelling or word-choice mistakes, which helps me correct them quickly.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答表意清楚但不够自然,存在语法和人称混用(I/we)、重复表达(need to type/so we need)。建议:1) 保持人称一致(用“I”);2) 精简句子,使用连接词(for example, and, so)使逻辑流畅;3) 提供具体频率或场景让内容更具体。
Exemplo: Yes, I type every day, mainly on a laptop. I use messaging apps like WeChat and WhatsApp to chat with friends, and I often search for information on Google for work or study.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 犹豫词太多,发音停顿频繁且句子结构混乱。建议:1) 减少填充词(um, uh),回答要简洁;2) 给出明确时间点并用简洁句子说明原因或背景;3) 注意语法(use the keyboard / use some applications)。可在练习中多次复述流利版本。
Exemplo: I learned to type in primary school during our computer classes. The teacher showed us how to use the keyboard and basic applications, so I started practicing from that time.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 表达意图明确但句子含糊且有语法问题和冗余。建议:1) 使用更自然的表达,如“like other skills, you need to spend time practising”;2) 明确具体方法和频率,举例说明使用哪些应用;3) 用连接词使句子连贯。
Exemplo: Like other skills, I improve my typing by practising regularly. I try to type for 1–2 hours a day and use typing practice apps such as TypingClub or Keybr to improve speed and accuracy.
× I prefer handwriting because I think when I write notes by hand I remember them more easily.
✓ I prefer handwriting because I think when I write notes by hand I remember them more easily.
句子本身语法正确。“more easily”作为副词短语修饰remember,用法恰当,不需修改。只是注意在口语中可以简化为“I remember them better when I write them by hand.”以更地道表达。
× I also find that writing manually makes me easier to support some mistakes in Word choice and spelling.
✓ I also find that writing manually makes it easier for me to notice some mistakes in word choice and spelling.
错误类型:13 不正确使用形容词或副词。原句中“makes me easier”结构不正确,英语中应使用“make it + adjective + for + someone + to do”或“make someone + adjective”。此处正确表达是“makes it easier for me to notice...”。另外“support”用错,应为“notice”或“spot”。“Word”不需大写,改为小写。建议多练习固定结构“make it + adj + for + sb. to ...”,并注意动词选择。
× Absolutely, because every day I we need to use some chat application like WeChat or WhatsApp.
✓ Absolutely, because every day we need to use some chat applications like WeChat or WhatsApp.
错误类型:27 主谓一致/句子成分错误。原句包含多余的主语“I we”,应保留一个主语“we”或“I”。上下文用复数“applications”更自然,因为举例了多个应用。建议检查句子主语,确保只有一个,并根据可数名词使用单数或复数。
× So we need to type words on the keyboard and we also search some information on Google.
✓ So we need to type words on the keyboard and we also search for some information on Google.
错误类型:13 词语使用不当/介词遗漏。短语“search some information”缺少介词“for”,正确为“search for information”。建议记住常用动词的固定搭配,如“search for”,“look for”。
× MMM. I think my primary school T uh, period, because we have the, uh, the computer, uh, classes and the teacher, uh, taught us how to use keyboard and uh, also use some application to apply.
✓ I think in primary school, during computer classes, the teacher taught us how to use the keyboard and how to use some applications.
错误类型:26 句子结构混乱与冗余填充词。原句有口语填充词(uh, MMM),重复定冠词“the the”,结构不连贯,动词短语“use some application to apply”错误并冗余。改为“during computer classes”并用并列结构“how to use the keyboard and how to use some applications”。建议说话时减少填充词,理清时间状语、主谓宾,并使用并列连接相似结构。
× I think just to like other skills, you need, uh, pay more time into it and practice, uh, typing every day and for one hour, 2 hours, and also, uh, through some apps to.
✓ I think, like with other skills, you need to spend more time on it and practice typing every day for one to two hours, and also use some apps to help.
错误类型:6 时态与动词搭配问题。原句中“you need, uh, pay more time into it”搭配错误,应为“spend time on something”或“put more time into it”。“for one hour, 2 hours”改为“for one to two hours”更自然。结尾“through some apps to”不完整,改为“use some apps to help”。建议记住常用搭配(spend time on, practice + Ving),并将数量表达连贯起来。