Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler phrases, and provide one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words (because/so) correctly and reduce hesitation words (actually, there's a not really special reason).

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and makes communication easier. For example, I can quickly email classmates or edit assignments without rewriting, which saves me time.

Sugestão: Use correct verb forms and a clear structure: topic sentence plus brief supporting detail. Avoid repeating phrases and correct countable noun forms (homework is uncountable).

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop because I only have a laptop at home. I do all my work and homework on it, so I rarely use a desktop keyboard.

Sugestão: Give a clear time reference and coherent details. Start with a direct answer (e.g., at age X or in school) then add one supporting detail. Avoid long hesitations and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. I practiced on my brother’s old laptop a lot, which helped me get comfortable with the keyboard quickly.

Sugestão: Answer directly and offer specific methods for improvement. Use correct phrasing (focus on improving my typing). Provide one or two concrete examples of how you practice and use linking words (for example/so).

Exemplo: I don't practice formally, but I improve gradually by typing daily. For example, I use online typing lessons once a week and try to type assignments without looking at the keys to build speed.

× I would like to say typing is more easy for me because actually there's a not really special reason, but it's so quick and easy to communicate with each other.

✓ I would like to say typing is easier for me because there is not really a special reason, but it's so quick and easy to communicate with others.

Use the comparative form 'easier' instead of 'more easy' for one-syllable adjectives; change 'there's a not really special reason' to 'there is not really a special reason' for correct word order; use 'others' instead of 'each other' when referring generally to people you communicate with. Suggestion: use 'easier' and simpler word order: 'there is not really a special reason'.

× Usually I using laptop keys because I just have a laptop and I doing my work and homeworks on my laptop.

✓ Usually I use the laptop keyboard because I only have a laptop and I do my work and homework on it.

Present simple is required for habitual actions: use 'I use' instead of 'I using', and 'I do' instead of 'I doing'. Use 'the laptop keyboard' or 'the laptop keys' and 'homework' is an uncountable noun, so use 'homework' not 'homeworks'. Also replace 'just' with 'only' for clarity and use 'on it' to avoid repetition.

× So I would like to say I usually use laptop key.

✓ So I would like to say I usually use the laptop keyboard.

Singular/plural and article: 'laptop key' is incorrect for the general device; use 'the laptop keyboard' (singular collective) and include the definite article 'the' for a specific object. Suggestion: say 'use the laptop keyboard'.

× Actually, I was going so close with uh, desktop and laptops because my brother has a bad laptop so and, and I play at his laptop so I don't know it's when I directly learn it, but it was very.

✓ Actually, I spent a lot of time using desktop computers and laptops because my brother had a broken laptop, and I used his laptop to play, so I don't know exactly when I learned to type, but it was a long time ago.

Original sentence has multiple structural problems: incorrect tense and phrasing ('was going so close with' is incorrect), awkward conjunctions and fragments, and an incomplete ending 'but it was very.' Rewrite clarifies meaning: use past simple 'spent', 'had', 'used', and 'learned to type'. Provide clear temporal reference 'a long time ago'. Suggestion: keep sentences concise and use standard past tense for past events.

× How do you improve your typing? So actually I'm not really focused on that. I'm not really focused on to improve my skill of typing.

✓ So actually I'm not really focused on that. I'm not really focused on improving my typing skills.

Use the gerund with 'focused on' followed by the -ing form: 'focused on improving' rather than 'focused on to improve'. Also 'typing skills' is the natural plural. Suggestion: use 'focused on improving my typing skills'.

× It's just my daily think. So maybe it's just improving, uh, 1% in daily, yeah.

✓ It's just something I do daily, so maybe it improves by about 1% each day.

Word choice and form: 'think' should be 'thing', and 'in daily' is incorrect; use 'daily' as an adverb or 'each day'. Use a clearer phrasing 'improves by about 1% each day'. Suggestion: say 'it's something I do daily' and 'it improves a little each day'.