Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 직접적이지만 더 자연스럽고 구체적인 이유가 필요합니다. 문장 구성이 단순하고 'more' 같은 비교 표현이 불필요하게 들어가 있으므로 명확하게 고치세요. 또한 연결어로 이유를 제시하면 대화 흐름이 좋아집니다. 예: 주된 이유(속도, 가독성 등)와 상황(예: 과제나 메모 작성)도 덧붙이세요.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and my notes are easier to read. For instance, when I take notes in lectures or write essays, typing helps me work more quickly and organise my thoughts.

Sugestão: 말이 어색하고 불필요한 반복('type with the keyboard')과 망설임('umm')이 있습니다. 간단명료한 주제문을 말한 뒤, 구체적인 이유(이동성, 휴대성 등)와 빈도 표현을 덧붙이세요. 연결어로 'because'나 'so'를 사용해 논리를 명확히 하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because it's portable and I can study or complete assessments anywhere. For example, I often work on assignments in the library or at home using my laptop.

Sugestão: 응답이 매우 불명확하고 문장이 끊겨 있습니다. 정확한 시점을 명확히 말하고 그 이유나 배경(예: 수업, 시험 준비)을 간단히 설명하세요. 간결한 문장(1~2문장)으로 구성하고 불필요한 단어는 제거하세요.

Exemplo: I learned to type properly in high school when I had to take many timed exams. The practice during classes and preparing for tests helped me improve my speed.

Sugestão: 전달은 되지만 구체성이 부족합니다. 'use laptop more' 대신 구체적인 연습 방법(타자 연습 사이트, 매일 연습 시간 설정, 게임 등)을 제시하고 빈도나 기간을 말하면 신뢰도가 높아집니다. 연결어로 'for example' 또는 'by'를 사용하세요.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising for 20 minutes every day on online typing websites. For example, I use typing tests to track my speed and accuracy and focus on exercises for keys I find difficult.

× I'm not good at handwriting, so I prefer typing more.

✓ I'm not good at handwriting, so I prefer typing.

The adverb 'more' is unnecessary after 'prefer.' In English, 'prefer' already indicates a comparative preference and is followed directly by the preferred option (prefer A to B) or by a gerund (prefer doing). Remove 'more' to make the sentence natural. Suggestion: use 'I prefer typing' or 'I prefer typing to handwriting.'

× Yes, I type umm, the laptop keyboard because I always type with the keyboard and the assessment.

✓ Yes, I type on the laptop keyboard every day because I always type for my coursework and assessments.

The original sentence has awkward structure and wrong prepositions. Use 'type on' for keyboards and 'for' to indicate purpose. Also, 'the assessment' is vague; 'assessments' or 'coursework and assessments' fits better. Remove filler 'umm' in formal responses. Suggestion: 'I type on the laptop keyboard every day because I always type for my coursework and assessments.'

× Maybe in the high school because my high school test is most. I almost. To use keep.

✓ I learned in high school because I had many tests then and I needed to use a keyboard often.

The original contains fragmented sentences and wrong tense and word order. Use past tense 'learned' to refer to when the skill was acquired. Replace unclear phrases with 'I had many tests then' and 'needed to use a keyboard often' to express reason. Suggestion: 'I learned in high school because I had many tests then and I needed to use a keyboard often.'

× Actually, I try to use my laptop more and more so I can improve my typing skills.

✓ Actually, I try to use my laptop more and more so that I can improve my typing skills.

The sentence is mostly correct but benefits from adding 'so that' to clearly express purpose. This clarifies the relationship between the action and the intended result. Suggestion: include 'so that' for clarity: 'I try to use my laptop more and more so that I can improve my typing skills.'