Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce repetition and correct small grammar errors; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and a brief contrasting detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient when I write reports or long documents. However, I sometimes handwrite notes when I need to brainstorm, since writing by hand helps me slow down and think more clearly.

Sugestão: Combine sentences to avoid fragments and correct article and verb errors. Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., because, so).

Exemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard for about four hours a day because I work as an engineer. I write reports and papers and regularly analyze data sets, so I need a portable computer for these tasks.

Sugestão: Avoid tense inconsistencies and repetitions. Start with a clear time statement, then explain briefly how you practiced, using linking words like 'at first' and 'later'.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was six after my father gave me a computer. At first I mainly used it for games, but later I started keeping a daily diary, which gave me regular practice and greatly improved my speed.

Sugestão: Be specific and use correct nouns; avoid awkward phrases and repetitions. Give a concise list of methods with linking words and explain briefly how each helps. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: I improve my typing through online typing games, regular practice writing reports, and doing touch-typing drills. These activities boost my accuracy and speed, and the drills help develop finger strength and muscle memory.

× I prefer typing because it is time time efficient and convenient when you want to write a report or an paper.

✓ I prefer typing because it is time-efficient and convenient when you want to write a report or a paper.

Double 'time' is a repetition error; use hyphenated adjective 'time-efficient'. Use 'a paper' (not 'an paper') because 'paper' begins with a consonant sound. Suggestion: proofread to remove repetitions and check article before nouns.

× But I always I sometimes use handwriting when I need time to conceive something.

✓ But I sometimes use handwriting when I need time to think of something.

Phrase contains an extra pronoun 'I' and conflicting adverbs 'always' and 'sometimes'. Remove the extra 'I' and choose the correct adverb 'sometimes'. 'Conceive' is awkward here; 'think of' is natural. Suggestion: avoid duplicate words and choose one adverb that matches intended meaning.

× I always type on a laptop keyboard about four hours a day.

✓ I always type on a laptop keyboard for about four hours a day.

Preposition 'for' is required to indicate duration with time expressions. Suggestion: use 'for' before durations (for about four hours).

× Because I'm an engineer, I need to write report and paper and I always do analysis the data set.

✓ Because I'm an engineer, I need to write reports and papers and I always analyze the data set.

'Write report and paper' needs plural 'reports and papers' or articles; 'do analysis the data set' is ungrammatical: use verb 'analyze' with object 'the data set'. Also maintain parallel structure. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general activities and correct verb choice.

× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was six years old because my father gave me a computer.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was six years old because my father gave me a computer.

Sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no change needed. Explanation: 'learned' and 'gave' correctly use past tense to describe past events.

× At first I mainly use it to play games, but I soon started typing a diary, a day diary, which helped me, helped me practice and get much faster at typing.

✓ At first I mainly used it to play games, but I soon started keeping a diary, which helped me practice and get much faster at typing.

Sequence of past events requires past tense 'used' not 'use'. 'Typing a diary' is awkward; 'keeping a diary' is idiomatic. Remove duplicate 'helped me' and use 'helped me practice'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and avoid repetition.

× I improve my typing by print, typing games and writing papers and Diaries, and I think writing can help me strengthen my fingers finger fingers muscles.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing typing drills, playing typing games, and writing papers and diaries, and I think writing can help strengthen my finger muscles.

Use gerund forms for activities: 'practicing', 'playing', 'writing'. 'Print' is unclear—use 'practicing typing drills' or 'print practice'. Capitalization error: 'Diaries' should be lowercase. Remove duplicate 'finger fingers' and use 'finger muscles' or 'finger muscles'. Suggestion: use gerunds for methods and correct noun phrases; avoid repetition and capitalization errors.