Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문법(시제와 어순)과 자연스러운 표현을 다듬어야 합니다. 답변이 직접적이긴 하지만 문장이 어색하고 불필요한 부분(‘so I use’)이 있습니다. 추가로 한두 개의 구체적 이유(예: 속도, 편집 용이성)를 연결어(for example, because, and)를 사용해 2~3문장으로 명확히 정리하세요. 또한 발음·유창성 향상을 위해 짧고 자연스러운 문장 구조를 연습하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit long texts. For example, when I write essays I can quickly correct mistakes and rearrange sentences, which saves me a lot of time.

Sugestão: 문법(시제 일치)과 반복 표현(‘writing practice writing’)을 고쳐야 합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 데스크톱인지 노트북인지 답하고, 이유를 간결하게 덧붙이세요. 연결어(and, because)를 사용해 문장을 논리적으로 연결하세요.

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop every day because I study for the IST test on my laptop. I especially use it for writing practice and editing my essays.

Sugestão: 발음과 유창성(빈번한 음성 채움어)과 문법(관사, 시제, 수일치)을 개선하세요. 질문에는 시점을 명확히 말하고 간단한 배경을 덧붙이세요. 예: ‘When I was in elementary school’으로 시작하고 연결어(so/ because)를 사용해 이유를 설명하세요. 불필요한 반복과 움찔거림을 줄이기 위해 문장을 미리 연습하세요.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. There were computer classes at my school, so I joined them and practiced typing regularly.

Sugestão: 시제 일관성(과거/현재 혼용)을 바로잡고, 내용을 구체화하세요. 현재 어떻게 연습하는지(예: 온라인 타자 연습, 정기적인 연습 시간, 목표 WPM)와 과거의 습관을 간단히 비교하여 2~3문장으로 정리하면 더 설득력 있습니다. 채움어(umm, uh) 사용을 줄이기 위해 문장 템플릿을 만들어 연습하세요.

Exemplo: When I was young I practiced typing every day to build speed. Now I still improve by using online typing tests and setting daily goals for accuracy and speed.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because time on a keyboard is faster and it's easier to type long sentences, so I use.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing on a keyboard is faster and it's easier to type long sentences, so I do.

The sentence misuses the noun 'time' where the present participle 'typing' or the gerund phrase 'typing on a keyboard' is required to express the action. Also the final clause 'so I use' is incomplete; replace with 'so I do' to avoid repeating 'typing' while keeping correct verb usage. Suggestion: use consistent gerund phrases for actions (typing on a keyboard) and use auxiliary 'do' to avoid repetition.

× Yes, I typed every day because I use a computer every day for studying for IST test, especially writing practice writing.

✓ Yes, I type every day because I use a computer every day to study for the IST test, especially to practice writing.

The original mixes past tense 'typed' with present habitual meaning. Use present simple 'type' for daily habits. Also 'studying for IST test' needs the infinitive 'to study' and article 'the' before 'IST test'; 'practice writing' should be expressed as 'to practice writing' or 'practice writing' as a noun phrase. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for habitual actions and use infinitives for purpose.

× I learn learned how to type on a keyboard. Uh, when I was a elementary school student, umm, it had had a computer classes so I joined.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was an elementary school student because we had computer classes, so I joined them.

Use simple past 'learned' (not 'learn') to describe a past action; 'a elementary' should be 'an elementary' (article error but covered in article errors; however main issue is tense and article). 'It had had a computer classes' is incorrect: use 'we had computer classes' or 'there were computer classes' and 'joined them' to refer to the classes. Suggestion: use simple past for past events and correct articles ('an elementary') and pronouns to make subject clear.

× Oh, when I was a young I usually practice typing on a keyboard every day. Umm. But I growing up I usually umm, use typing so naturally improve.

✓ When I was young, I usually practiced typing on a keyboard every day. As I grew up, I used typing regularly, so I naturally improved.

The speaker mixes time expressions and tenses. 'When I was young' requires past tense; use 'practiced' for habitual past action. 'I growing up' is incorrect; use past participle or clause 'As I grew up'. 'use typing' is awkward; use 'used typing regularly' or better 'used the keyboard regularly'. 'Improve' should be past 'improved' to match timeframe. Suggestion: align time expressions with past tense and use natural collocations like 'practice typing' or 'use the keyboard'.