Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words (e.g., "umm"). Also correct phrases like "typewriting" to "typing" and "written a gift" to "a handwritten note".

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal. For example, a handwritten note from a friend seems more meaningful than an email, so it makes me feel appreciated.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear supporting detail with a linking word. Remove repetition and fix grammar ("desktop given by work" -> "desktop provided at work").

Exemplo: I usually type on my laptop because I don't own a desktop. However, at work I use a desktop provided by my employer, but I prefer my laptop because it's more portable and comfortable.

Sugestão: Give a clear past-time topic sentence, use correct verb forms and avoid unclear phrases. Provide one or two specific details (who sent you, what you learned) and use linking words like "because" or "so".

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was 17 after my father enrolled me in a computer class. Although we didn't have a computer at home, he believed it would be useful in the future, and now those skills help me at work.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: start with a clear method, then give a specific example of practice. Use correct grammar and reduce fillers. Use linking words such as "for example" or "by" to show method and result.

Exemplo: I improved my typing mainly through practice in a course where my teacher encouraged me to type every sentence that appeared on the screen. For example, by repeatedly copying on-screen exercises I increased my speed and accuracy over time.

× I prefer handwriting actually, because I feel like handwriting is more special than typewriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting, actually, because I feel handwriting is more special than typing.

Use of 'typewriting' is uncommon; 'typing' is the correct gerund. Also remove the repeated noun and place 'actually' with commas. Ensure parallel forms: 'handwriting' vs 'typing'.

× For example, if you are given a gift, written a gift.

✓ For example, if you are given a handwritten gift.

The original is ungrammatical: 'written a gift' is incorrect word order. Use adjective 'handwritten' to modify 'gift' to express the intended meaning.

× Umm, a gift written by hands from someone.

✓ A gift written by someone's hand.

Word order and phrasing are awkward. Use the possessive 'someone's hand' or the adjective 'handwritten' for natural expression.

× So that makes you feel so special, that's why.

✓ So that makes you feel special; that's why.

Redundant phrasing and punctuation: 'so' and 'that's why' both mark result. Remove redundancy and correct punctuation for clarity.

× I type on my laptop since I don't have a desktop, but when I go to work I have to type with desktop given by work.

✓ I type on my laptop since I don't have a desktop, but when I go to work I have to use the desktop provided by my workplace.

Missing article before 'desktop' and unnatural phrase 'given by work'. Use 'the desktop' and 'provided by my workplace' for correct article use and natural phrasing.

× I prefer laptop because it's easier.

✓ I prefer my laptop because it's easier.

Missing determiner 'my' before 'laptop'. In English, singular countable nouns generally need an article or possessive.

× I attended the class, uh, like when I was 17, my dad sent me to the computer class.

✓ I attended a class when I was 17; my dad sent me to a computer class.

Use 'a' instead of 'the' for general reference and simplify filler words. Tense 'attended' and 'sent' are correct; adjust articles and punctuation for clarity.

× Even though we don't own a computer or a laptop at home, he suggest me to land it.

✓ Even though we didn't own a computer or laptop at home, he suggested I learn it.

Verb form and pronoun errors: 'suggest' should be past 'suggested' to match past context; 'me to land it' is incorrect — likely 'learn it'. Change 'don't' to 'didn't' to match past time 'when I was 17'.

× He says in the future it were useful for you.

✓ He said it would be useful for me in the future.

Sequence of tenses: change 'says' to past 'said' and 'were' to conditional 'would be'. Pronoun 'you' should be 'me' because speaker is talking about himself.

× Now, even now that's really useful for me.

✓ Even now, that's really useful for me.

Redundant 'now' repetition. Use present tense 'is' contracted as 'that's' correctly; adjust punctuation for natural speech.

× I would say I improve skills a lot of my teacher from the course he umm, he supports me to type umm every sentence appear on the screen.

✓ I would say I improved my skills a lot because of my teacher from the course; he supported me to type every sentence that appeared on the screen.

Tense consistency and word order: use past tense 'improved' and 'supported' to match the completed course. Add 'because of' for cause, and use relative clause 'that appeared' for clarity.

× So I used to type that those sentence and if it getting frustrated and first start then I improve a lot.

✓ So I used to type those sentences, and although it was frustrating at first, I improved a lot.

Plural agreement: 'sentence' -> 'sentences'. Tense and form: 'used to' + past 'was frustrating' and 'improved' for past progress. Fix conjunctions and word order for natural meaning.