Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid grammar errors and redundancies, and give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'the suggested corrections' or 'spell-check') and avoid absolute comparisons without nuance.

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it’s generally faster and more convenient. For example, spell-checkers and auto-correct help me type more accurately, which saves time when I’m writing emails or essays.

Sugestão: Open with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two concise reasons linked logically. Fix tense and article errors and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately.

Exemplo: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I live in a dorm and need something portable. As a student, I find a laptop more convenient for moving between classes and the library.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer with one supporting detail. Avoid hesitations and unnecessary phrases. Use past tense correctly and be specific about timing (e.g., 'in primary school' or 'around age X').

Exemplo: I learned to type in primary school, around age nine. I also improved my speed later by texting on my phone and practicing school assignments.

Sugestão: Respond directly: say whether you actively practice or not, and provide specific methods if you do. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I haven't put much effort into it' or 'practice makes perfect') and avoid vague phrases like 'single day practice'. Give concrete examples of improvement strategies.

Exemplo: I haven’t practiced formally, but using my laptop every day has helped. Recently I started using online typing lessons for 10 minutes a day, which improved my accuracy and speed.

× I prefer typing because I think it's faster and more convenient. Especially with modern technology, computers can automatically find the wrong letter when you type in and the suggest correction. I think that's a handwriting can't compare with it.

✓ I prefer typing because I think it's faster and more convenient. Especially with modern technology, computers can automatically find wrong letters when you type and suggest corrections. I think handwriting can't compare with it.

Errors: 'the wrong letter' and 'the suggest correction' are incorrect in number and article use. 'Wrong letter' should be plural 'wrong letters' because multiple mistakes may occur; 'the suggest correction' is wrong because 'suggest' is a verb here and needs the plural noun 'corrections' or the verb form 'suggest corrections'. Also remove the unnecessary 'the' before 'wrong letters'. The clause 'I think that's a handwriting can't compare with it' is awkward; corrected to 'I think handwriting can't compare with it' to remove the extra article 'a' and redundant pronoun 'it'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb and noun number agreement and avoid unnecessary articles.

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I'm still a student and I lived in a dorm so laptop is more convenient and more comfortable for me because it's easier to move between dorm and school.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I'm still a student and I live in a dorm, so a laptop is more convenient and comfortable for me because it's easier to move between the dorm and school.

Errors: 'I lived' uses past tense incorrectly; context requires present tense 'I live' (Present tense issue). Missing articles: 'so laptop is more convenient' needs 'a laptop'; 'between dorm and school' needs 'the dorm' for a specific dorm. Also 'more comfortable' is redundant with 'more convenient' but acceptable. Suggestion: keep verb tense consistent with current situation and use appropriate articles before singular countable nouns.

× I'm not completely sure but the clear date, but I think it's would be a primary school or middle school time because I think when I have phone I naturally, uh, learn to how to type on the keyboard because I need to send a message.

✓ I'm not completely sure of the exact date, but I think it would be in primary or middle school because when I had a phone I naturally learned to type on the keyboard because I needed to send messages.

Errors: 'the clear date' is incorrect; use 'the exact date' or 'of the exact date' (preposition and article). 'It's would be' mixes tenses and is ungrammatical; use 'it would be'. 'A primary school or middle school time' is awkward; use 'in primary or middle school'. 'When I have phone' needs past tense 'had a phone' and article 'a phone'. 'I naturally, uh, learn to how to type' has incorrect verb forms: use past tense 'learned to type' and remove extra 'to'. 'I need to send a message' should be past 'I needed to send messages' to match timeframe and plural 'messages' is more natural. Suggestion: align verb tenses to the same time frame and use correct prepositions and articles.

× Actually I didn't pay effort for with that because I think practice make perfect, uh, when I go to the college, I need to use laptop every day. So I think the single day practice make me, uh, typing faster.

✓ Actually I didn't make an effort with that because I think practice makes perfect. When I went to college, I needed to use a laptop every day. So I think daily practice made me type faster.

Errors: 'didn't pay effort for with that' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'didn't make an effort with that' (verb collocation and preposition). 'Practice make perfect' needs third person singular agreement 'practice makes perfect' (subject-verb agreement / third person singular issue). 'When I go to the college' should be past tense 'When I went to college' to match context and 'the' before 'college' is unnecessary. 'I need to use laptop' requires article 'a laptop' and past tense 'needed'. 'The single day practice make me, uh, typing faster' is ungrammatical: use 'daily practice made me type faster'—use 'daily' instead of 'single day', past tense 'made', and base verb 'type' rather than gerund after 'made'. Suggestion: use correct collocations, match verb tenses, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose natural adverbs (daily).