Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, correct comparative phrasing (prefer X to Y), and give one specific reason. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is quite messy and often hard for others to read. For example, when I write notes by hand classmates sometimes ask me to rewrite them, so typing is faster and clearer for me.

Sugestão: Be more fluent and remove hesitations and irrelevant details. Use a clear topic sentence stating daily habit, then one brief supporting reason using a linking phrase such as "because" or "so". Correct verb forms and pluralization.

Exemplo: I usually type on my laptop keyboard because I own one and it travels with me. Occasionally at the office I use a desktop keyboard, but I prefer the laptop since it is convenient and portable.

Sugestão: Provide a direct time reference and reduce fillers. Use a clear sentence: when you learned, what course, and a concise result. Avoid repetition and vague phrasing like "come to know" — use "realized" or "became good at".

Exemplo: I learned to type in 10th grade when I took an IT course at school. After two years of practice in that class, I became much better at typing than handwriting.

Sugestão: Give a specific, practical plan rather than a general proverb. State methods and link them with connectors. Keep to 2–3 sentences and include examples of activities or tools you use to improve.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing tests and exercises. For instance, I spend 15–20 minutes each day on a typing program to increase speed and accuracy, and I focus on proper finger placement and posture.

× Most of the people they you know, like they had a hard time reading my writing.

✓ Most people had a hard time reading my handwriting.

Redundant plural phrasing and incorrect noun choice: 'Most of the people they you know' is wordy and ungrammatical. Use 'Most people' (correct plural) and 'handwriting' instead of 'writing' when referring to how one forms letters. Remove redundant pronouns 'they' and filler words. Also change 'my writing' to 'my handwriting' for clarity.

× So I prefer typing than writing because I had a really bad handwriting.

✓ So I prefer typing to writing because I have really bad handwriting.

Incorrect comparative structure: use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than B'. Tense/person issue: 'I had' suggests past; handwriting is a current characteristic, so use present 'I have'. 'A really bad handwriting' is incorrect article use; 'handwriting' is uncountable here, so no article.

× Uh, well I own 1UH laptop so I mostly do typing on my laptop keyboard whereas sometime I used to uh I used a desktop keyboard also when I am in the office so.

✓ Uh, well I own a laptop, so I mostly type on my laptop keyboard, although sometimes I use a desktop keyboard when I am in the office.

Multiple issues: unnecessary numeric code '1UH' removed. Use article 'a laptop'. 'Do typing' is incorrect collocation — use 'type'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'I used to I used' is redundant and wrong tense; use present simple 'I use' for habitual action. Reorganize for clarity and correct conjunction 'although' instead of 'whereas' for contrast in this context.

× But I prefer a laptop keyboard because it is always with me.

✓ But I prefer a laptop keyboard because it is always with me.

Original sentence is grammatically acceptable, but ensure consistency: 'prefer' (present simple) and 'is always with me' correctly express habitual preference. No change needed.

× Well, it was during my 10th grade, like I had been enrolled in uh, IT, we said IT course, which is, uh, computed related, uh, study.

✓ Well, it was during my 10th grade; I enrolled in an IT course, which was computer-related study.

Use simple past 'I enrolled' for a specific past event rather than past perfect 'I had been enrolled', which is unnecessary. Article error: 'an IT course' required. 'Computed related' is incorrect word order and form; use 'computer-related'. Clean filler words for clarity.

× So after like, uh, studying it for two years, then I had come to know that I'm pretty well in typing rather than writing.

✓ So after studying it for two years, I came to know that I'm better at typing than at writing.

Tense: use simple past 'I came to know' for the result of a past period. 'Had come' (past perfect) is unnecessary without a reference point. 'I'm pretty well in typing' is incorrect: use adjective 'better' and preposition 'at' — 'better at typing than at writing' is correct comparison structure.

× So basically practice I would say, because a saying goes like practice makes men perfect.

✓ So basically practice, I would say, because the saying goes 'practice makes perfect'.

Idiomatic expression: correct proverb is 'practice makes perfect' (not 'practice makes men perfect'). Include definite article 'the' before 'saying'. Punctuation around the proverb clarifies it. No -ing change needed here beyond idiom correction.

× Whatever you do, if you practice a lot, then obviously you will learn it faster.

✓ Whatever you do, if you practice a lot, you will learn it faster.

Redundant 'then obviously' can be simplified. Pronoun 'it' is vague but acceptable; to be clearer, specify the skill: 'you will learn it faster' -> 'you will learn the skill faster' if needed. Streamline sentence for natural spoken English.

× So I would say like, uh, to improve our typing.

✓ So I would say that to improve your typing, you should practice regularly.

Original is an incomplete sentence/fragments ('to improve our typing' lacks main clause). Provide a complete sentence with subject and verb. Change 'our' to 'your' to address the listener; if speaker means general advice, 'your' or 'one's' is clearer. Add recommendation 'you should practice regularly' to complete thought.