Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence (I prefer typing) then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition and filler words, and correct awkward phrases (e.g. "send it electronically" not "electronic electronically"; "write on paper" instead of "doing the right thing on the paper").

Exemplo: I prefer typing. It’s faster and more convenient because I can send messages instantly from my phone, and digital notes are easier to organize and search than handwritten ones.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first (Yes, I use a laptop), then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar ("I use a laptop"; "I also do some writing on it"). Avoid vague phrases like "write some".

Exemplo: Yes, I use a laptop every day because it’s portable, so I can take it outside, and it’s comfortable for typing long documents when I need to do more writing.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear timeframe and one brief supporting detail. Use correct vocabulary ("sixth grade" instead of "Six Standard" and "subject at school" instead of "in this label").

Exemplo: I learned to type in sixth grade at school because computer studies were part of the curriculum, so we had regular lessons on using the keyboard.

Sugestão: Be specific and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (I improve my typing by...). Give two concrete methods and use linking words. Correct phrases ("take computer classes", "practice regularly", "practice makes perfect") and avoid awkward sentences like "I also can admit by writing experience."

Exemplo: I improve my typing by taking computer classes to learn proper techniques, and by practicing regularly with online typing exercises, as regular practice helps increase speed and accuracy.

× Whenever I need to send any information and message, I'll send it electronic electronically instead of, uh, doing the right thing on the paper.

✓ Whenever I need to send any information or a message, I send it electronically instead of writing it on paper.

The sentence has awkward word choice and adverb placement. 'Electronic' is an adjective but the correct adverb is 'electronically' (Grammar problem type 13). Also 'any information and message' should be 'any information or a message' for correct coordination and article use (Grammar problem type 22). 'I'll send' suggests future but context is habitual, so present simple 'I send' fits (Grammar problem type 6). Finally, 'doing the right thing on the paper' is unnatural; use 'writing it on paper.' Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and place the adverb after the verb: 'I send it electronically.'

× Well, I use laptop in order to write because it is very easy.

✓ Well, I use a laptop to write because it is very easy to carry.

The noun 'laptop' needs an article: 'a laptop' (Grammar problem type 22). 'In order to write' is wordy; 'to write' is natural. The original 'because it is very easy' is incomplete about what is easy; adding 'to carry' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and make the reason explicit.

× Whenever I go outside I can carry it with me and I also write some.

✓ Whenever I go outside, I can carry it with me and I also write sometimes.

'Write some' is incorrect; the adverb 'sometimes' should be used to indicate occasional action (Grammar problem type 11 and 13). Add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity. Suggestion: replace 'write some' with 'write sometimes' or 'do some writing occasionally.'

× When I was studying during the school time at Six Standard, the computer was an important subject in this label.

✓ When I was in sixth grade, computer studies were an important subject there.

Multiple issues: 'Six Standard' should be 'sixth grade' (word order and form) and does not need 'the' before it; 'the computer' is better as 'computer studies' to refer to the subject (Grammar problem type 22). 'In this label' is incorrect and likely intended as 'there' or 'at that school' (Grammar problem type 11). Also match plurality: 'computer studies were' (Grammar problem type 1/27). Suggestion: use standard school level terms and correct noun forms and prepositions.

× So on that time I learned how to type on the keyboard.

✓ So at that time I learned how to type on the keyboard.

Use 'at that time' as the correct prepositional phrase (Grammar problem type 11). The past tense 'learned' is correct for a past event, but preposition was wrong. Suggestion: replace 'on that time' with 'at that time.'

× There is some way to improve my typing.

✓ There are some ways to improve my typing.

'There is' with 'some way' is grammatically possible but sounds odd; more natural is plural 'some ways' with 'there are' for multiple methods (Grammar problem type 12 and 1). Suggestion: use 'There are some ways' or 'There is a way' depending on singular/plural meaning.

× First of all I can add on some computer classes.

✓ First of all, I can take some computer classes.

'Add on' is incorrect in this context; the verb 'take' is used with classes (Grammar problem type 11). Also add a comma after the introductory phrase. Suggestion: use collocations: 'take computer classes.'

× In this way I can improve my writing.

✓ In this way, I can improve my typing.

The student earlier refers to typing; 'writing' is less precise. To be consistent use 'typing' (Grammar problem type 12). Also comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: maintain consistent terminology.

× The apart from this, the practice makes person perfect.

✓ Apart from this, practice makes a person perfect.

'The apart from this' is ungrammatical; use 'Apart from this' (Grammar problem type 26). 'Practice' as an uncountable noun does not need 'the.' 'Makes person perfect' requires the indefinite article 'a person' (Grammar problem type 22 and 1). Suggestion: use correct articles and word order: 'Apart from this, practice makes a person perfect.'

× If I do practice by myself, I also can admit by writing experience.

✓ If I practice by myself, I can also improve through writing experience.

Several issues: 'do practice' is unnecessary auxiliary; use 'practice' (Grammar problem type 12). 'I also can' has unnatural adverb placement; 'I can also' is correct (Grammar problem type 20). 'Admit by writing experience' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'improve through writing experience' or 'gain experience by writing' (Grammar problem type 13). Suggestion: use natural verb forms and adverb placement: 'I can also improve through writing practice.'