Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문장 구조를 간결하게 하고 핵심을 먼저 말한 뒤 구체적 이유를 자연스럽게 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 반복과 어색한 표현(예: "I like, I think I like", "analog emotion")을 피하고 더 적절한 어휘와 연결어를 사용하세요. 예를 들어 주제문 → 이유 → 간단한 예 순으로 2~3문장 안에 답을 마무리하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting. I find writing with a pencil more personal and calming, and it helps me remember things better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can organize ideas more clearly than when I type.

Sugestão: 문장 오류와 중복을 줄이고 주제문을 분명히 말하세요. 문법(주어+동사)과 시제, 전치사 사용을 확인하세요. 또한 연결어로 이유를 자연스럽게 연결하고 한두 개의 구체적 이유만 제시하세요.

Exemplo: I usually use a laptop keyboard because it is more convenient and portable. Although I am familiar with desktop keyboards, I prefer my laptop for work and travel because I can use it anywhere.

Sugestão: 시간 순서를 더 명확히 하고 불필요한 단어와 반복을 제거하세요. 질문에는 간단한 시점(예: 대학 때)과 한두 문장의 배경 설명을 덧붙이세요. 중요한 것은 명확한 문장 구조(주어-동사-목적어)를 유지하는 것입니다.

Exemplo: I learned to type at university. Around that time the internet and email were becoming popular, so I needed to type to communicate and shop online.

Sugestão: 방법을 더 구체적으로 설명하세요. 단순히 "매일 사용한다"고 말하는 대신, 빈도나 구체적 활동(예: 연습 프로그램, 속도 연습, 오류 수정)을 추가하면 답이 더 설득력 있어집니다. 또한 문장을 간결하게 유지하세요.

Exemplo: I improve my typing mainly by practising every day. I type emails and documents regularly, and sometimes I use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Actually I prefer handwriting.

✓ Actually, I prefer handwriting.

Sentence is correct but needs a comma after 'Actually' for natural flow. No pronoun error; keep as is.

× So today I apply for paper examination because I'm kind of old fashioned, so I'm very used to using the pencil.

✓ So today I applied for the paper examination because I'm kind of old-fashioned, and I am very used to using a pencil.

Use past tense 'applied' to indicate a completed action related to the exam. 'Paper examination' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Old fashioned' should be hyphenated as 'old-fashioned' when used as an adjective before a noun. Use 'a pencil' instead of 'the pencil'. Use 'and' instead of a comma and 'so' to improve sentence structure.

× So I like, I think I like analog emotion.

✓ I think I like analog emotions.

Remove hesitation 'So I like, I think' and simplify. Use plural 'emotions' for a general idea. 'Analog' is fine as adjective.

× So it's very attractive to me.

✓ It is very appealing to me.

'Attractive to me' is understandable but 'appealing to me' is more natural. Also start sentence without conjunction 'So'.

× Actually, I familiar with the desktop keyboard B, but listen, yeah, I I more use laptop because it's very convenient and it's very portable.

✓ Actually, I am familiar with desktop keyboards, but I use a laptop more because it is very convenient and portable.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' for 'I am familiar'. Use plural 'keyboards' for general familiarity. Remove filler 'listen' and duplicate 'I'. Use 'use a laptop more' for correct word order and article.

× So especially I'm I like it after keyboard, but you I'm more use laptop keyboard.

✓ Especially, I like using the laptop keyboard, and I use it more than a desktop keyboard.

Fix pronoun/subject repetition 'I'm I'. Use gerund 'using'. Clarify comparison 'more than a desktop keyboard'.

× Actually my university I learned how to type on a keyboard umm at the time very popular from Internet shopping, so and the first time came out some e-mail system.

✓ Actually, at university I learned how to type on a keyboard when Internet shopping became popular and when e-mail systems first appeared.

Reorder to clear chronology. Use past tense 'learned' and past events 'became' and 'appeared'. Remove filler 'umm' and awkward phrasing 'the first time came out'.

× So at that time my first time firstly learn about how to tie.

✓ So at that time, I first learned how to type.

Use past tense 'learned'. Remove redundant words 'first time firstly' and correct spelling 'type' not 'tie'.

× Actually there is no correct way, but every day I'm using the keyboard and then it's getting better and better.

✓ Actually, there is no single correct way, but by using the keyboard every day, my typing gets better and better.

'There is no correct way' is acceptable but 'no single correct way' is clearer. Change present continuous 'I'm using' to simple present habitual 'I use' or passive rephrase. 'It's getting better' should specify what gets better: 'my typing gets better'.

× So umm, I didn't take any any practice, but it's naturally improved.

✓ So I didn't do any formal practice, but my typing improved naturally.

Use 'didn't do' instead of 'didn't take' with 'practice'. Remove duplicate 'any'. Use simple past 'improved' to match 'didn't'. Specify 'my typing' as subject of improvement.