Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing because typing is more convenient and easy than handwriting for me and you know typing can fasten efficiency of your work or study and it can save a lot of time and make your spend this time to enjoy your life.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, yes, I tap on my desktop or laptop keyboard every day because, you know, I'm a student at present and so every day I have to learn. My learn have to learning. So yeah, I always click the keyboard during my study.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Uh, it's approximately when I was 10 years old. Yeah, I remember, Yeah, I remember in that period the phone and computer more and more popular than before. So in that period I learned how to tap on a keyboard.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
In my opinion, I would like to say more exercise and more tap in your spare time. You know, for instance, I, I love, I always, I always type a novel to improve my typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 回答要更简洁并直接回应问题,同时使用更自然的表达和连贯的衔接词。注意语法和词汇搭配(例如:"fasten efficiency" 应为 "increase efficiency","make your spend" 不正确)。控制在3–4句内,给出一两个具体原因并用连接词衔接。
Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, typing helps me complete assignments quickly, so I have more free time to relax. Also, digital documents are easier to edit and share with classmates.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答要避免重复和口头禅,句子要完整且语法正确。直接说明哪种设备用得更多,并给出具体场景或原因。使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I usually study and write essays on it. Sometimes I also use a desktop at home for longer tasks, but the laptop is my main device due to its portability.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 68.0Sugestão: 回答要更自然并减少重复,提供更具体的细节(例如谁教的或如何练习)。注意时态和表达习惯,把口语填充词(uh, yeah)控制住。
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about ten. My parents gave me a small computer, and I practiced typing games and simple exercises, which helped me become faster over time.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答应更具体并用自然表达说明方法,避免重复和不完整结构。给出具体练习方法和频率,并用连接词把观点和例子连接起来。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing for at least 20 minutes every day using typing websites and exercises. For example, I often type short stories and essays to build speed and accuracy, and I review mistakes to avoid them next time.
× I prefer typing because typing is more convenient and easy than handwriting for me and you know typing can fasten efficiency of your work or study and it can save a lot of time and make your spend this time to enjoy your life.
✓ I prefer typing because typing is more convenient and easier than handwriting for me, and, you know, typing can increase the efficiency of your work or study. It can save a lot of time and allow you to spend that time enjoying your life.
句中使用了形容词与副词错误或不一致:1) “more convenient and easy” 中应使用并列比较级,正确为 “more convenient and easier” 或更自然地用 “more convenient than handwriting”。2) “can fasten efficiency” 是错误搭配,英语常用 increase/improve efficiency;“fasten” 常指固定。3) “make your spend this time to enjoy your life” 结构混乱,应为 “allow you to spend that time enjoying your life”。建议:注意形容词比较级的一致性,使用恰当动词搭配(increase/improve),用动词不定式或动名词短语表达目的或结果。
× Yes, yes, I tap on my desktop or laptop keyboard every day because, you know, I'm a student at present and so every day I have to learn. My learn have to learning. So yeah, I always click the keyboard during my study.
✓ Yes, yes, I tap on my desktop or laptop keyboard every day because, you know, I'm a student at present and so every day I have to study. My learning has to do with practice. So yeah, I always press the keyboard during my study.
句子存在主谓一致与词类错误:1) “I have to learn” 更自然为 “I have to study”;2) “My learn have to learning.” 不符合英语语法,‘learn’ 是动词,需改为名词 ‘learning’,并且主谓要一致:‘My learning has to do with practice’ 或更自然改句子表达与练习有关;3) “I always click the keyboard” 用词不当,keyboard 上应用 ‘press’ 或 ‘type’。建议:使用正确名词形式、保持主谓一致,选用恰当动词搭配(study/type/press)。
× Uh, it's approximately when I was 10 years old. Yeah, I remember, Yeah, I remember in that period the phone and computer more and more popular than before. So in that period I learned how to tap on a keyboard.
✓ Uh, it was approximately when I was 10 years old. Yeah, I remember that, in that period phones and computers became more and more popular than before. So at that time I learned how to type on a keyboard.
时态和表达不准确:1) “it's approximately when I was 10 years old” 时态混用,描述过去应使用过去时,改为 ‘it was approximately…’;2) “the phone and computer more and more popular than before” 缺少谓语动词,应改为 ‘phones and computers became more and more popular’;3) “tap on a keyboard” 用词不够自然,通常说 ‘type on a keyboard’。建议:描述过去事件时统一使用过去时,补全句子谓语,使用常用搭配(type on)。
× In my opinion, I would like to say more exercise and more tap in your spare time. You know, for instance, I, I love, I always, I always type a novel to improve my typing.
✓ In my opinion, I would say: do more exercises and type more in your spare time. You know, for instance, I always type novels to improve my typing.
动名词与动词形式错误:1) “more exercise and more tap” 中应使用动词短语 ‘do more exercises’ 和 ‘type more’,且 ‘exercise’ 需复数或用动词形式;2) “type a novel” 若指写小说则应为 ‘write a novel’,但若指打小说文本以练习,可用复数 ‘type novels’ 或 ‘type a novel’ 视语境;重复和赘词(I, I love, I always, I always)应精简。建议:使用正确的动词或动名词形式(do exercises,type),保持句子简洁,避免重复。