Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant with good coherence, but it is slightly long and repetitive (mentions convenience and ease of editing twice). To improve, start with a concise topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a brief example. Vary vocabulary (e.g., 'editing' → 'revising') and avoid repeating the same idea.

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it's quicker and more convenient. For example, when I draft reports I can easily revise sentences and use spelling checks on my laptop, which saves time compared with rewriting by hand.

Sugestão: The answer addresses the question but is repetitive and contains small grammar/style issues (e.g., 'more soft' → 'softer'). Keep it to one or two concise sentences, avoid repetition, and add a specific reason or brief comparison (e.g., portability, key travel).

Exemplo: I type on my laptop keyboard every day. I prefer it because the keys are softer and the laptop is more portable than a desktop, so I can work from different places comfortably.

Sugestão: The answer has a clear time reference but includes fillers and informal phrases ('uh', 'right', 'cause') and some grammatical issues ('in nowadays'). Remove fillers, use a clear topic sentence and add one specific detail about the class to enrich the response (e.g., what you learned).

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a sophomore at university. We had a practical typing class where I learned touch-typing techniques, which helped me increase my speed and accuracy.

Sugestão: Good content and honesty, but slightly wordy. You can make it more concise and add a specific example of tasks that helped you improve (e.g., writing reports, using shortcuts). If possible mention one strategy you might try to improve further (e.g., online exercises) to show awareness of improvement methods.

Exemplo: I haven't practiced formally; my typing improved through daily tasks like writing emails and drafting reports for work. If I wanted to get faster, I'd use online typing exercises and keyboard shortcuts to boost speed and accuracy.

× I have a laptop and so I type on the laptop keyboard every day and to be honest, I prefer a laptop keyboard because it is more soft, it is softer and it is comfortable to use.

✓ I have a laptop, so I type on its keyboard every day, and to be honest, I prefer a laptop keyboard because it is softer and more comfortable to use.

Use of 'more soft' is incorrect; comparative form of 'soft' is 'softer'. Also avoid repetitive phrases ('it is softer and it is comfortable') by combining adjectives and using 'more' before 'comfortable' for parallel structure. Replace 'the laptop keyboard' with 'its keyboard' to avoid repetition and make the sentence more natural.

× It is more comfortable using laptop keyboard compared to a desktop.

✓ It is more comfortable to use a laptop keyboard compared to a desktop keyboard.

Missing article before 'laptop keyboard' and incorrect gerund phrasing. Use the infinitive 'to use' for general statements about comfort, include the article 'a', and repeat 'keyboard' after 'desktop' for a clear comparison.

× I started to learn, uh, type on a keyboard when I was a sophomore at university.

✓ I started to learn to type on a keyboard when I was a sophomore at university.

After 'started' use either 'to' + infinitive or verb+ -ing, but not both; 'started to learn to type' is awkward. The natural phrasing is 'started to learn to type' or 'started learning to type'; here 'started to learn to type' or better 'started learning to type' works. The correction uses 'started to learn to type' simplified to 'started to learn to type' changed to 'started to learn to type' then simplified to 'started to learn to type' but clearer to use 'started to learn to type' or 'started learning to type'—the provided correction uses 'started to learn to type' for grammatical sequence.

× 'cause I think in nowadays when people just know how to use the keyboard, it's very popular now.

✓ Because I think nowadays, when people know how to use the keyboard, it is very common.

'in nowadays' is incorrect; use 'nowadays' without a preposition. 'Just know' is unnecessary; 'know how to use' is sufficient. 'Popular' is acceptable but 'common' is more natural for a widespread skill. Also avoid both 'nowadays' and 'now' together.

× I remember we had a typing class at that time that was very interesting, right?

✓ I remember we had a typing class then that was very interesting.

'At that time' is wordy with 'remember'; 'then' is more natural. Removing the tag question 'right?' makes the statement more formal and appropriate for a test response. Tense 'had' is correct, so only stylistic change applied.

× Typing is a prerequisite for my job, so I developed that skill through daily work typing emails and documents, rather than through formal practice.

✓ Typing is a prerequisite for my job, so I developed that skill through daily work, typing emails and documents, rather than through formal practice.

Missing comma to separate clauses improves readability. Alternatively, 'through daily work, by typing emails and documents' could be used. The original has no major grammatical error but benefits from punctuation for clarity.

× I suppose my speed and accuracy have improved naturally over time.

✓ I suppose my speed and accuracy have naturally improved over time.

Adverb placement: 'naturally' is more naturally placed before the main verb 'improved' rather than after it. This improves sentence flow and clarity.