Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 먼저 주제문을 간단명료하게 제시하고 이유를 덧붙이세요. 동사 표현은 정확히 사용하고, 불필요한 단어는 제거하세요. 예를 들어 ‘I prefer handwriting’로 시작하고 ‘because’로 이유를 연결한 뒤 구체적 이유(예: helps me remember, more personal) 를 하나나 두 개 제시하세요. 최대 문장 수는 3~4문장으로 유지하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can organize ideas more clearly, which makes studying easier later.

Sugestão: 응답이 어색하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 간단한 주제문으로 시작해 하루 빈도와 기기 종류를 명확히 말하세요. 추가 설명으로 이유나 사용 상황(예: portability, convenience)을 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 연결어(for example, because)를 사용하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Exemplo: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient. For example, I can work from different places like cafes or the library.

Sugestão: 시간 표현과 문장구조에 심한 오류가 있습니다. 정확한 시제를 사용하고 연령 또는 연도를 명확히 표현하세요(예: when I was five / five years ago). 불필요한 반복을 피하고, 배우게 된 경위나 맥락을 하나 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was five years old because my parents bought a computer for the family. Since then, I have used a keyboard regularly for school and projects.

Sugestão: 좋은 내용이지만 시제와 부사 사용을 다듬어야 합니다. 현재 습관을 말할 때는 현재형을 사용하고 연습 방법을 구체적으로 설명하세요(예: online exercises, typing software, accuracy focus). 문장은 2~3개로 간결하게 유지하세요.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing for about an hour every day using online typing software to increase speed and accuracy. I also focus on proper finger placement and do timed tests once a week to track progress.

× I pretty part handwriting because it is easy to be.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is easier.

'pretty part' is incorrect collocation; the intended verb is 'prefer' (a verb of preference). 'handwriting' is a noun here, acceptable. 'easy to be' is ungrammatical — use comparative 'easier' to compare handwriting to typing. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for choices and form comparatives correctly.

× Or I would laptop keyboard every day.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day.

'Or I would laptop keyboard every day' is ungrammatical. The sentence needs a subject + correct verb. Use the simple present 'use' for habitual actions ('every day'). Include the article or determiner 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. Suggestion: form sentences as 'I use a laptop keyboard every day.'

× I learned it when I was five years ago. It's very, very long.

✓ I learned it five years ago. It's been a very long time.

Combine time expression correctly: 'learned it when I was five years old' or 'learned it five years ago.' 'When I was five years ago' mixes 'when' + 'ago' incorrectly. Also 'It's very, very long' is unnatural for elapsed time; use 'It's been a very long time.' Suggestion: choose one correct time structure and use present perfect 'has been' for duration.

× I practiced every day for five hours, yes.

✓ I practice every day for five hours.

Context asks 'How do you improve your typing?' Habitual improvement uses present simple: 'I practice every day.' The student used past tense 'practiced' which implies a finished action; use present tense for routine. Remove 'yes' or place as separate acknowledgement. Suggestion: use present simple for regular habits and specify duration 'for five hours' if still true.