Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing in my daily life because I think, umm, uh, we use computers in more times and handwriting maybe, uh, is not very popular among the young people because it's a little bit, umm, hard and less times.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I tap on laptop's keyboard everyday is because I think a laptop is very, uh, useful toys for me to during my daily plans like learning some English and uh, uh, send some information to my friends. It's very, uh, it's very easy for me to.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Uh, maybe it's when I was in childhood because, uh, I always play with my sisters in her, in her house and he often let me play computer games with her. So maybe this times I protest my keyboard skills.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think I'm not very serious to uh, improve my typing in uh, uh, certain times. Maybe when I study English on my tablet, umm, I type in the English words. This, this ways pretext my typing skills.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 回答要更直接且流畅,减少语气词(如 "umm"、"uh"),并用更准确的表达来说明原因。可以开头直接给出观点,然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持。注意句子简洁(不超过5句)。
Exemplo: I prefer typing because I use computers and phones every day. For example, I type emails, chat with friends and take notes on my laptop, which is faster and neater than handwriting.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答要更正规、语法正确,避免把 laptop 叫作 "toys"。先直接回答问题(desktop or laptop),然后用一到两句具体说明用途并举例。去掉重复和停顿,控制在五句话内。
Exemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. I use it for studying English, writing assignments and messaging friends, so it is very convenient and portable.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答时间表达要清晰,避免语法错误和混乱的代词(如 he/she)。先给出确切时间或年龄,然后说明环境或原因,使用正确动词(learned, practiced),避免不必要的填充词。
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a child. I often played computer games with my sister, which helped me practice and improve my keyboard skills.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: 回答应更具体地说明你用哪些方法练习打字(例如练习软件、在线课程、定期练习),并指出频率或效果。避免模糊和否定句(如 "not very serious")作为主要信息。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing websites for 10–15 minutes a day. I also type essays and English exercises on my tablet, which gradually increases my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer typing in my daily life because I think, umm, uh, we use computers in more times and handwriting maybe, uh, is not very popular among the young people because it's a little bit, umm, hard and less times.
✓ I prefer typing in my daily life because I think we use computers more often, and handwriting may not be very popular among young people because it's a bit harder and used less often.
主谓一致和句子结构问题:原句中“we use computers in more times”和“less times”短语不符合英语习惯表达,且句子衔接混乱。建议使用固定搭配“more often / used less often”来表示“更常/更少使用”;将“maybe”改为“may”更书面;删去多余填充词以保持流畅。
× I tap on laptop's keyboard everyday is because I think a laptop is very, uh, useful toys for me to during my daily plans like learning some English and uh, uh, send some information to my friends.
✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because I think a laptop is a very useful tool for my daily activities, like learning English and sending information to my friends.
介词、所有格和可数名词使用错误:原句中“tap on laptop's keyboard”不自然,常用“use a laptop keyboard”或“tap on the laptop keyboard”;“everyday”应作形容词用时写作“every day”表示频率;“a laptop is very... toys”中“toys”不合适,应为“tool”;“to during”是不正确的词序和介词搭配,应用动名词短语如“for my daily activities”。建议用简洁自然的短语并注意可数名词单复数与冠词。
× It's very, uh, it's very easy for me to.
✓ It's very, uh, very easy for me.
现在时和句子结构问题:原句末尾不完整,“to”后应接动词或不定式,或删除“to”使句子完整。这里保留一般现在时陈述,建议删除残缺的“to”。
× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? / Uh, maybe it's when I was in childhood because, uh, I always play with my sisters in her, in her house and he often let me play computer games with her. So maybe this times I protest my keyboard skills.
✓ When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? / Maybe it was during my childhood because I always played with my sisters at their house and he often let me play computer games with them. So maybe at that time I practiced my keyboard skills.
过去时问题与代词/指代错误:回答应使用过去时“was”和“played”;“in childhood”更常说“during my childhood”;“in her, in her house”应为“at their house”;代词“he”与后文“her”指代混乱,需统一为“he…them”或适当指代;“this times”错用时态和数,应为“that time”或“at that time”;“protest”拼写或用词错误,应为“practice”。建议使用一致的过去时并注意代词一致与正确词汇选择。
× Uh, maybe it's when I was in childhood because, uh, I always play with my sisters in her, in her house and he often let me play computer games with her.
✓ Maybe it was during my childhood because I always played with my sisters at their house and they often let me play computer games with them.
现在时与代词错误:原句中“I always play”应改为过去时“I always played”;“in her, in her house”与“he often let me...her”代词混用且不一致,改为复数“their/they/them”。保持时态与代词一致。
× So maybe this times I protest my keyboard skills.
✓ So maybe at that time I practiced my keyboard skills.
过去时和词汇错误:应使用过去式“practiced”而非“protest”,并使用正确时间表达“at that time”。
× I think I'm not very serious to uh, improve my typing in uh, uh, certain times.
✓ I don't think I'm very serious about improving my typing at certain times.
现在时和介词用法:原句中“I'm not very serious to improve”语法不正确,正确表达为“be serious about doing something”;“certain times”常用“at certain times”。建议用“don't think”来表示否定观点并使用“about + -ing”结构。
× Maybe when I study English on my tablet, umm, I type in the English words.
✓ Maybe when I study English on my tablet, I type English words.
动名词/现在分词和介词使用:原句“type in the English words”中“in”多余,且“the English words”不用定冠词,直接用“English words”。时态保持一般现在时与时间状语从句一致。
× This, this ways pretext my typing skills.
✓ This way practices my typing skills.
句子结构与词汇错误:原句“this, this ways pretext”结构混乱且“pretext”用词错误,正确应为“this way practices”或更自然“To practice my typing skills”。建议改为“this way helps me practice my typing skills”以更清晰表达目的。