Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và ngắn gọn (1-2 câu chủ đề + 1-2 câu bổ sung). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản (subject-verb agreement, articles, pronouns) và giảm tiếng lắp. Ví dụ cần nêu lý do cụ thể và minh họa. Cụ thể: (1) Mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng: "I prefer handwriting." (2) Giải thích lí do cụ thể: "because it feels more personal and thoughtful." (3) Thêm ví dụ ngắn: "For example, I like receiving handwritten notes." Sửa các lỗi: "it's depend" -> "it depends", "it's make us feel" -> "it makes me feel", tránh mơ hồ như "they are fused about it".

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and thoughtful. For example, when I write a letter by hand, it shows I spent time and care, which makes the message more meaningful.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Trả lời nên trực tiếp và chính xác; sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ. Tránh câu vòng và lặp từ (umm). Cấu trúc: câu chủ đề nêu tần suất, tiếp theo nêu lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể. Ví dụ sửa lỗi: "I need to write in a notebook" thay vì "write a notebook"; "I finish my homework on my laptop" thay vì "see I'm finished".

Exemplo: Not every day. As a high school student, I mostly write in a notebook for class, but I do finish my homework on my laptop, especially typing essays and assignments.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Cần dùng thì và mệnh đề chính xác, tránh dùng cấu trúc lỗi như "stopped us typing". Trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng (khi nào), tiếp theo nêu ngữ cảnh và kết quả. Chú ý số nhiều/số ít: "a primary school student" hoặc "primary school", "in every lesson". Thêm liên từ như "so" hợp lý.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had computer classes where we practiced typing in every lesson, so I became comfortable using the keyboard early on.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời cần cụ thể về phương pháp thực tế, dùng thì hợp lý (present simple cho thói quen). Tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Nêu 2-3 phương pháp cụ thể (thực hành qua phần mềm, luyện tốc độ, chú ý tư thế) và kết quả mong đợi. Sửa các cụm sai: "studying typings" -> "practicing typing", "every days" -> "every day".

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing programs and doing timed exercises to increase speed. I also focus on correct finger placement and posture to reduce errors and type more comfortably.

× Umm it's depend on what they are fused about it.

✓ Umm it depends on what they are focused on.

'It's depend' is incorrect because the verb must agree with the singular subject 'it'; use 'depends' (third person singular). 'Fused' is the wrong word here; the correct verb is 'focused on' or 'talking about'. Suggestion: use 'it depends on' + noun phrase, and choose the correct verb meaning (e.g., 'focused on').

× But for me I prefer handwriting because it's make us feel like they uh respect their partner or they have.

✓ But for me I prefer handwriting because it makes us feel like the writer respects their partner.

Problems: 'it's make' mismatches subject-verb agreement (should be 'it makes'). 'They uh respect their partner or they have' is unclear; pronoun reference is wrong. I replaced with singular neutral 'the writer' and 'their' to match gender-neutral usage. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and use clear pronoun references.

× Is this more like cute valuable like this?

✓ Is this more like something cute and valuable?

Original lacks proper structure and uses 'like' redundantly. Change to 'something cute and valuable' to create a grammatical noun phrase. Suggestion: avoid repeating 'like' and use adjectives in parallel form.

× No, umm, I mean so I'm a student of high school so I need to write a notebook more than typing on a keyboard.

✓ No, umm, I mean I'm a high school student so I need to write in a notebook more than type on a keyboard.

'I'm a student of high school' is awkward; 'a high school student' is natural. 'Write a notebook' should be 'write in a notebook'. Also maintain parallel verbs: 'write ... more than type' rather than mixing 'write' and 'typing'. Suggestion: use natural noun order and parallel verb forms.

× But I see I'm finished my homework on my laptop.

✓ But I usually finish my homework on my laptop.

'I see I'm finished' is incorrect tense and structure. Use 'I usually finish' to express habitual action. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and avoid incorrect passive-like constructions.

× Like typing in the keyboard but are not much like uh writing.

✓ I type on the keyboard, but not as much as I write by hand.

Sentence had missing subject and incorrect comparative structure 'are not much like'. Correct form: subject 'I' + verb 'type', and compare amounts with 'not as much as'. Suggestion: include explicit subject and use standard comparison patterns.

× I learned how to type when I was primary school student.

✓ I learned how to type when I was a primary school student.

Missing article 'a' before 'primary school student'. Past tense 'learned' is correct. Suggestion: include appropriate articles before singular countable nouns.

× I just stopped us typing during computer class.

✓ I just started using typing during computer class.

'Stopped us typing' is incorrect. Likely intended 'started us typing' or 'started using typing'. I changed to 'started using typing' which is still awkward; better: 'I learned to type during computer class' or 'we practiced typing during computer class'. Suggestion: choose correct verb ('learned', 'started', or 'practiced') and appropriate object.

× We practiced using keyboard in every lessons so it's helped me know how to type right now.

✓ We practiced using the keyboard in every lesson, so it helped me learn how to type.

Issues: missing article 'the' before 'keyboard'; 'in every lessons' should be 'in every lesson' (singular after 'every'); 'it's helped me know' is wrong tense and wording—use 'it helped me learn'. Suggestion: use correct articles, singular after 'every', and correct verb forms.

× I will try to improve my typing uh in any method is uh, like is better two times because I'm studying typings every days every time, so it's better on time.

✓ I will try to improve my typing by using any good method; it's better to practice twice as much because I study typing every day.

Original has many issues: 'in any method is uh' is ungrammatical; 'is better two times' should be 'practice twice as much' or 'two times better' depending on meaning; 'typings every days' incorrect pluralization and article. I rewrote to convey a clear future intention and habitual practice: 'I will try... by using any good method' and 'practice twice as much' with 'every day' (adverb). Suggestion: simplify sentence, use 'practice' with frequency expressions, use 'every day' (two words) for daily habits.