Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense/wording errors (e.g., "habituated" → "used to", remove "but I but").

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing. I have always been used to writing by hand since childhood, so I feel more comfortable organizing my ideas on paper. For example, during exams I can write faster and more clearly when I use a pen rather than a keyboard.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and streamline details. Correct grammar and reduce hesitations. Use linking words like "but" or "however" to contrast. Mention one or two specific activities you do when typing.

Exemplo: Yes, I type every day, mainly on a laptop. However, I don't type professionally; I usually type to browse the internet, look up movies, and use tools like ChatGPT. This regular use keeps my basic typing skills active.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear time reference and then add one or two concrete details. Remove filler words and unclear phrasing. Use linking words like "later" or "also" to connect points.

Exemplo: I learned to type in the eighth grade during computer classes at school. Later, in tenth grade, using mobile phones and apps like WhatsApp helped me become more comfortable and faster at typing.

Sugestão: Structure your answer: state the main methods, then give specific examples and results. Use linking words like "for example" and "as a result". Replace vague phrases with measurable or observable details if possible.

Exemplo: I improved my typing mainly through daily chatting on WhatsApp and Instagram. For example, frequent group chats about school events forced me to type quickly, and searching on Google also increased my speed. As a result, my average typing speed and confidence on a keyboard improved noticeably.

× I prefer handwriting over typing because since my childhood I'm habituated to handwriting and intense situations.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because since my childhood I have been habituated to handwriting and intense situations.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A over B' in formal contexts; also 'since my childhood' requires present perfect continuous or present perfect (have been habituated) to show a state continuing from past to present rather than simple present 'I'm habituated'. Use 'have been habituated' or 'have been used to' to indicate ongoing habituation.

× I'll get panicked when it comes to typing, but I but if handwriting I can clearly give my thoughts, put my thoughts on paper.

✓ I panic when I have to type, but with handwriting I can clearly put my thoughts on paper.

The original has redundant words ('but I but if') and incorrect phrasing. Use 'panic' as the verb (not 'get panicked') and 'when I have to type' for a habitual reaction. Use 'with handwriting' and concise phrase 'put my thoughts on paper'.

× Yes, I do type on laptop keyboard everyday, but not it's not my profession.

✓ Yes, I do type on a laptop keyboard every day, but it is not my profession.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' and 'every day' is two words. Also 'not it's not' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'it is not' or 'it's not'.

× I do not do it professionally.

✓ I do not do it professionally.

Sentence is grammatically correct but repetitive with previous clause; keep as is. (No correction needed.)

× Uh, I do it very often because just to search for movies or search any important things I do need or go for browsing and ChatGPT.

✓ I do it often just to search for movies or other important things I need, or to browse and use ChatGPT.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and redundant phrases ('search any important things I do need or go for browsing'). Use 'search for' then a clear list: 'search for movies or other important things I need, or to browse and use ChatGPT.' Ensure parallel structure with infinitives 'to search', 'to browse', 'to use'.

× That's it for that part I'll do typing in keyboards.

✓ That's it for that part; I type on keyboards when needed.

Original is awkward and ungrammatical. Use a semicolon or period to separate clauses. 'I'll do typing in keyboards' is incorrect; use 'I type on keyboards' and add 'when needed' for clarity.

× I have learned typing on a keyboard during my 8th class where I had computer classes, uh, they would teach us what all, what are all the, uh, typing necessities on the keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard during my 8th grade when we had computer classes; they taught us the basic typing skills on the keyboard.

Use simple past 'learned' for a finished action at a specific time (8th grade). 'Have learned' is possible, but 'during my 8th class' is awkward—use 'during my 8th grade'. Also use 'learned to type' rather than 'learned typing'. Rephrase 'what all' to 'the basic typing skills'.

× And also, uh, later during my 10th class, we had mobile phones and we are very habituated to how to type and all before with WhatsApp and Google and all.

✓ Also, later in 10th grade, we had mobile phones and became very used to typing on them for WhatsApp, Google, and other apps.

Mixes past and present tenses. Use past 'became' for a past change. Replace 'are very habituated to how to type' with 'became very used to typing' and remove informal 'and all'.

× I improved my typing skills with regular conversations with my friends in WhatsApp and Instagram.

✓ I improved my typing skills through regular conversations with my friends on WhatsApp and Instagram.

Use 'through' or 'by' rather than 'with' for the method. Use preposition 'on' for platforms (WhatsApp, Instagram). Tense 'improved' is correct as a past general improvement.

× We used to group chat about various things happened in the school.

✓ We used to group chat about various things that happened at school.

Add relative pronoun 'that' and use 'happened at school' rather than 'happened in the school'.

× It helped me speed up my typing a lot and moreover, I also used to often Google some things which I don't know.

✓ It helped me speed up my typing a lot; moreover, I often used Google to look up things I did not know.

Maintain past narrative: use 'used' and 'did not know' (past), not present 'don't know'. Also rephrase 'used to often Google some things' to 'often used Google to look up things'.

× It also helped me boost up my typing skills.

✓ It also helped me improve my typing skills.

'Boost up' is informal and redundant; use 'improve' or 'boost' without 'up'. 'Improve my typing skills' is clearer and more natural.