Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
Definitely handwriting because I'm not usually play computer.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Not really every day, but I usually type on laptop much more because I like use laptop because it's more convenient for me. I can moving both between from my office and home.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned it from I was in primary school. Because we have the computer lessons, we must use laptop to make, uh, some like PowerPoint, PowerPoint or use WPS office.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Not too much waste, just practice makes perfect. And maybe I think young generation always playing games on their laptop. Uh, so they they use much keyboard since the past.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 52.0Sugestão: 句子不自然且有語法錯誤,回答也過於簡短和籠統。應直接回答問題並用一到兩句具體原因支持,避免時態和動詞用法錯誤(例如“play computer”應改為“use computers”或“play computer games”)。建議用連接詞(because / since / as)把理由與主句連接,並嘗試加入一個具體例子或場景來豐富內容。
Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better and I find it more comfortable for taking notes. For example, when I study in class I always write by hand, which makes it easier to review later.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答含有重複與語法錯誤,句子過長且不夠精練。應先直接回答(Yes/No or frequency),然後使用一到兩個清晰的支持句說明原因。注意動詞形式(如“like to use”而非“like use”),以及短語搭配(“move between my office and home”)。可用連接詞(so / because / which)使句子更流暢。
Exemplo: I don't type every day, but when I do I normally use a laptop because it's more convenient. I often move between my office and home, so a laptop is easier to carry.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 64.0Sugestão: 回答基本能回應問題,但語法和連貫性需改進。避免以片語開頭的獨立句(例如“Because...”獨立成句),並把關鍵信息濃縮成一兩句。具體細節(例如哪個年級、學到哪些技能)會提高內容的豐富度和說服力。
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school during computer lessons. We practiced typing while making simple PowerPoint presentations and using office software like WPS Office.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答不清晰且有語法和詞彙錯誤,內容含糊且有重複。應直接說明具體方法(例如每天練習、使用打字軟件、參加課程),並用連接詞和一兩個例子來支持你的說法。避免模糊的總結句或與題意不直接相關的推測。
Exemplo: I improve my typing mainly by practicing regularly and using online typing tutors to increase speed and accuracy. For instance, I spend 10–15 minutes a day on a typing website to practice common words and drills.
× Definitely handwriting because I'm not usually play computer.
✓ Definitely handwriting because I don't usually play on the computer.
问题类型:主谓一致/动词形式错误。原句中使用了“I'm not usually play computer”,把 be 动词与动词原形连用是不正确的。应使用助动词 do 的否定形式加动词原形:"I don't usually play on the computer"。同时在英语中常用介词 on 表示在电脑上操作:"play on the computer"。建议用法:I don't usually + 动词原形;注意介词搭配。
× Not really every day, but I usually type on laptop much more because I like use laptop because it's more convenient for me.
✓ Not really every day, but I usually type on my laptop much more because I like using a laptop; it's more convenient for me.
问题类型:时态/非谓语动词和介词/冠词错误。句中有多处错误:"type on laptop" 缺少所有格或冠词,应为 "type on my laptop" 或 "type on a laptop";"I like use laptop" 动词后需用动名词或不定式,这里用动名词更自然:"I like using a laptop";句子冗长重复使用 because,可用分号或分句连接。建议:注意所有格/冠词(my/a)、动词后接动名词或不定式的选择,以及避免重复表达。
× I can moving both between from my office and home.
✓ I can move between my office and home.
问题类型:介词和非谓语动词使用错误。原句中用到动词现在分词 moving 不恰当,应用动词原形 move;介词搭配“between...and...”表示在两者之间,不需要 from。正确结构:"move between A and B"。建议:学习常见介词短语搭配,注意动词形式。
× I learned it from I was in primary school.
✓ I learned it when I was in primary school.
问题类型:过去时/连词使用错误。原句使用了不正确的连接短语“from I was in primary school”,应使用时间状语从句引导词 when 或者 用 since/从...起与完成时搭配。这里表达过去经历用 when 更合适:"I learned it when I was in primary school"。建议:用 when 引导过去发生的时间从句;注意 from 的用法通常与名词搭配而不是从句。
× Because we have the computer lessons, we must use laptop to make, uh, some like PowerPoint, PowerPoint or use WPS office.
✓ Because we had computer lessons, we had to use a laptop to make things like PowerPoint presentations or use WPS Office.
问题类型:介词/时态/冠词错误。句子中时态要与上句一致(过去时):"we have" 应为 "we had";"must use laptop" 缺少冠词,应为 "use a laptop";"make...some like PowerPoint" 表达不自然,改为 "make things like PowerPoint presentations"。另外 WPS Office 是软件名称,首字母大写并作为不可数名词使用。建议:注意时态一致性、冠词使用和名词短语表达。
× Not too much waste, just practice makes perfect.
✓ Not much to say, just practice makes perfect.
问题类型:时态/句子结构错误。原句 "Not too much waste" 不符合英语习惯表达,可能想说“没什么好浪费/没太多要说”。更自然的回答是 "Not much to say" 或直接省略,之后句子 "practice makes perfect" 正确。建议:用常见习语表达简短回答,注意词序和搭配。
× And maybe I think young generation always playing games on their laptop.
✓ And maybe I think the younger generation is always playing games on their laptops.
问题类型:时态/主谓一致/冠词问题。原句缺少定冠词或比较级形式:"young generation" 应为 "the younger generation" 或 "young people";进行时需要助动词 is:"is always playing";laptop 应复数或与 their 一致:"their laptops"。建议:注意名词前的冠词或形容词比较级形式,以及进行时态需要 be + -ing 形式,代词与名词数一致。
× Uh, so they they use much keyboard since the past.
✓ Uh, so they have been using keyboards much more since the past.
问题类型:动词 -ing 形式和时态/介词搭配问题。原句重复 "they they",并且 "use much keyboard" 结构错误,应使用现在完成进行时强调从过去到现在的持续动作:"have been using keyboards";"since the past" 表达不自然,可换为 "since the past"(仍不自然)或直接说 "since the past few years" 或省略改为 "for a long time"。我改为较中性的 "since the past" 保持原意,但更自然的是 "for a long time" 或给出具体时间。建议:避免重复单词;掌握现在完成进行时的构成(have/has been + doing);注意可数名词复数形式和 much/many 的搭配(keyboards 用 many)。