Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Améliorez la grammaire et la structure de la phrase principale : utilisez un temps correct et une formulation plus naturelle. Donnez un détail précis et utilisez un connecteur pour relier les idées. Par exemple, corrigez les erreurs de conjugaison (« when I write ») et reformulez l'idée de repérage des notes de façon plus naturelle (« I can easily find my notes »). Limitez la réponse à 2–3 phrases pour rester concise.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it feels more practical and personal. For example, when I write in a notebook I can easily find my notes later, which helps me study more effectively.

Sugestão: Corrigez la structure grammaticale et l'usage des verbes après "because" : utilisez des formes cohérentes (par ex. gerund vs infinitive) et évitez les répétitions (« some some »). Ajoutez un connecteur pour clarifier la raison et un exemple concret d’activités de recherche. Restez dans 2–3 phrases.

Exemplo: I type on my laptop every day because I often do research online. For instance, I read articles and watch YouTube tutorials to learn new skills.

Sugestão: Améliorez le temps verbal (utilisez le past simple pour parler d'un événement passé) et éliminez les répétitions. Donnez une indication temporelle plus précise (par ex. "a few years ago") et utilisez des liaisons pour la cohérence. Corrigez la structure: « I learned by myself because my school didn’t offer typing classes. »

Exemplo: I learned to type by myself a few years ago because my school didn’t offer typing lessons. I practised regularly on my phone and laptop until I became more confident.

Sugestão: Utilisez un temps et une structure clairs (présent simple pour habitudes) et évitez la répétition. Précisez les méthodes utilisées (sites, exercices, durée) et donnez un résultat mesurable si possible. Par exemple : « I improve my typing by using free online exercises for about three months, which increased my speed. »

Exemplo: I improve my typing by doing free online exercises and watching tutorial videos on my phone. After practising for a few months, my typing speed and accuracy improved significantly.

× Also, when I writing on a notebook, I can clearly know where is my notes.

✓ Also, when I write in a notebook, I can clearly see where my notes are.

Present participle error and word order: 'I writing' is incorrect because the base form 'write' is needed after 'when' for simple present. Use 'write' to match habitual action. 'On a notebook' should be 'in a notebook' (preposition). 'I can clearly know where is my notes' has incorrect verb choice and word order; use 'see' not 'know' for locating notes, and the clause order should be 'where my notes are'. Also change 'my notes' agreement remains plural so 'are' is correct.

× I type my laptop every day because I usually do some research and finding some information, some articles or searching on some some YouTube videos.

✓ I type on my laptop every day because I usually do research and find information, read some articles, or watch some YouTube videos.

Preposition error: 'type my laptop' should be 'type on my laptop'. Gerund/verb form errors: use parallel verb forms after 'usually' — 'do research and find information' not 'finding'. 'Some research' and 'some information' are uncountable so omit 'some' before 'research' optional but acceptable. Use 'watch' for videos rather than 'searching on' to express viewing.

× Well actually I learning by myself because in school we don't have some particularly class for for teaching how to type on the keyboard.

✓ Well, actually I learned by myself because in school we didn't have any particular class for teaching how to type on the keyboard.

Tense error: speaker refers to past learning, so simple past 'learned' is required rather than 'learning'. Also 'we don't have' should be past 'we didn't have'. Article and adjective use: 'some particularly class' is incorrect; use 'any particular class'. Remove duplicate 'for'.

× So basically I just learn when I search in information on my cell phone.

✓ So basically I just learned by searching for information on my cell phone.

Tense and verb form: maintain past tense 'learned' to match previous sentence. 'Learn when I search in information' is unnatural; use 'learned by searching for information'. Preposition: 'search for information' is correct; 'on my cell phone' is fine for device.

× Will improve my typing by searching information on on my phone and some free online exercise for a few months and that really speed up my typing speed.

✓ I improved my typing by searching for information on my phone and doing some free online exercises for a few months, and that really sped up my typing speed.

Sentence structure and tense errors: 'Will improve' is incorrect here; if referring to past improvement use 'I improved'. Use 'searching for information' and 'doing exercises' for parallel structure. 'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises'. Tense agreement: 'speed up' should be past 'sped up' to match 'improved'. Also remove duplicate 'on' and avoid repeating 'typing speed' redundantly; however 'my typing speed' is acceptable.